Please do comment and give your honest reviews if you like my book and want it to continue to get updated because it's the only way I can improve as an author and improve our story. Yes our story each of your suggestions are welcome and all the critics and mistakes that you point out that I have made is very important for me because I'm not doing this because of money I'm doing it because I love creating all kinds of stories in my mind and I want to share It with you for free and at the same time create a better and more interesting universe.