SaintOaks

(Scrapped this dogshit: Maybe it can be revived when I’m
a better writer)

United States

Why is it so stupid to show aggression in the barracks ? The hero of this story has a brain the size of a chicken egg. To live for millions of years and not get smarter, you need to have talent. The whole story is funny. Thank you.

I liked the idea but he's a bit boring, like I get it, who ~! Super speed, but can't we have a different plot maybe? Like same as DC just inserting random plots, or going to another world diff from Marvel/DC and starting from there but nonetheless, it's a great read!

has potential to be one of the best fan fics I've read in a while but only time can tell coz only 8 chapters are out p.s please hurry up author we need more chapters☹️

It was good but after he got the sphinx and ghostrider powers there's no need for his speed anymore and the story doesn't really fit the title.[img=sad][img=sad][img=sad]

Es una muy buna historia                                                                                                                        





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Rubbish/scraps