Hi guys or whoever reads this!
Ima new writer I started off writing children's books and I wanna work on the type of stuff I like to read now. Idk how I'm doing the narrative, whether it be first or 3rd person, but I'd love to hear any tips comments, or ideas and possibly incorporate them into the story! Thank you and I hope you enjoy this!
The air was cool and the fog thick in Sawam. It's 1225 200 years since the first dungeon outbreak. I woke up looking at the stars from my hammock. The half-moon all that remains of the satellite peeking out from the clouds,
"yo!" yelled Kevin opening the sliding door
"you gonna stay outside all night or come in?"
"I'll be there in a second" I sigh guess I can't laze around forever. My pendant shines imperceptibly, I rub my eyes and it's gone. You want some grub Kev asks hit me Kevin slides him a bologna sandwich and an off-brand coke he takes a bite it's stale of course but he keeps eating it. We take the magic placement exam tomorrow Kevin says let's hope we awaken a rare element so we can finally get out of this place man. I look away not wanting to abandon my parents' old home. They'd long since passed but he enjoyed having it to remember them. Sorry, Kev says. It's all good man your right we do need to get out of this place. Ima head to sleep man try not to stay up late your hard to wake up Kevin says. I chuckle and think I'm the one who's hard to get up huh I finish off the coke and sandwich and head upstairs to my parent's old room which is mine now I take their picture off the nightstand and stare at them for a bit. I didn't know my parents very well; they died during a dungeon outbreak when I was 8. They were both normal people with no rare talent, but they worked hard to provide for me. I had my mom's black hair and single green eye. My other eye was grey like my dad's. I took one last look at the picture and the pendant and headed off to sleep.
Bang bang bang wake up Kevin said I check the time it's 5 am shut up Kevin it's 5 am he said it's 7:20 man your clock is off! Shit! I jump out of bed and start rushing throwing on a gray hoodie and some jeans I run my hands through my thick black hair trying to calm the bed head I jump and slide down the stairs grab a pop-tart and throw on some shoes near the front door that's what you're wearing Kevin asked "shut up princess" I said Kevin dressed in a suit and tie where did you even get that I ask we're broke it doesn't matter let's go he said. We head out to the bus stop.