i deleted the second chapter cause i didn't really like it and im going to change alot of things bc of the develompment that i chose for the story.
here is the edited chapter :Enjoy
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System|congratulations!! host has been reincarnated|
Saya:"you damned system!....agh just forget it....anyways, where i am??
System|host is in konohagakure|
saya:" of course i know that dumpo!i mean where exactly?"saya said with an irritated tone
System|host is in the orphanage right know|
Saya:"huh orphanage? why? did my parents died or somehting?"
System|host is right your mom died while giving birth to you and your dad died in the kyuubi attack by the way host is already 3 years old|
saya:"im already 3 years old? how is this possible?System explain .."saya said with a confused look
System|host is already 3 years old cause i speeded up the time,host didn't have to go throught all her childhood, cause she couldn't train or do anything but crying, eating and sleeping|
saya understood what the System meant by that so she nodded then looked at herself
she had a radiant white skin- wait wait wait saya was looking at all the directions just to find a mirror
and she found it, it was a small one that she found near her bed , she grabbed it and was stunned for a while!
she had a radiant white skin and a pair of a blood-like eyes with a silver white hair that is up to her waist, she had a devilish beauty she was so beautiful that she couldn't believe that it was her, she didn't even think that such a beauty would exist!
after sometime saya contained herself and asked the system
Saya:"System aren't i supposed to be a dragon? why do i look like a human?"
well not really because that beauty didn't say so,
System|host is a dragon and this is her human form, host can switch from her human form to her dragon form at will|
Saya"Woah that's so helpful!"saya muttered with excitement
Saya:"anyways...system open status"
System|status:
level:1
race:dragon
title: none
HP:100/100
chakra:10000000000(3 tailed beast amount of chakra,no one can sense it only if the host wanted to )
chakra control: 0%
dexterity: 7
vitality: 200
defence:100
combat power:6
afinitty: fire,space,time
skills: none
race skills: fly (D), dragon roar(E, when leveled up it could make someone that is more weaker then the mc collapse or shiver from fear), dragon eyes(can be upgraded,let the user see from long distances,let the user see with slow motion)
devil fruit: none
equipments: none
stat points:0|
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11~20 low genin
21~45 mid genin
46~70 high genin
71~89 low chunin
90~111 mid chunin
112~130 high chunin
131~147 special jonin
148~165 low jonin
166~189 mid jonin
190~220 high jonin
221~280 elite jonin
281~330 low kage
331~360 mid kage
361~430 super kage
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saya:"that's nice my vitality and defence are really hight! hahaha i like being a dragon! "
System|congratulations host for gaining a starter pack! would host like to open it?!|
saya:"yes of course!"
System|opening starter pack....host got the skills: dragon breath , fire control , shadow clone jutsu, inventory ,|
Saya:"niceeee!these skills looks cool!hmm i already know what inventory and clone jutsu do ,System explain the functions of the dragon breath and fire control skills |
System|
dragon breath:the host will be able to spit fire from her/his mouth
fire control:the user would be able to control fire at will(whether it's his/her or someone else)
saya:"these skills are really helpful especially the fire control skill!"when saya was thinking about what she could do with these skills the door of her room was opened and interrupted saya of her thoughts
the door revealed a young lady with brown hair and brown eyes(nothing special) that said:" saya get down to eat your breakfast it's morning already...oh your awake,go down and eat your breakfast with the other kids okay?"
when saya heard that she nodded and left her room.
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when she finished her breakfast she thanked the orphanage lady and told her that she is going to leave and play outside, the orphanage lady agreed to that but told her to come back before 7pm, saya nodded and then left the orphanage (i don't know how they leave a kid that is no more than 3 years old to'play'outside the orphanage without any accompany but ok i guess?)
saya was walking in the huge village and then saw a blond haired boy with a beautiful blue eyes getting beaten by some kids,no one helped him they just looked at him with hate or disgust, saya knew whose the blond haired boy was,who could he be but naruto? the main protagonist, saya didn'tknow why naruto didn't fight back or at least try to defende himself, saya knew that naruto was so naive but isn't that a little bit too much? saya couldn't stay watching without doing anything she was not that type of person who would help anyone that needs help nor was kind , but she knew how much naruto suffered in his childhood and how bad the villagers treated him without any reason, it's not like he was the tailed beast or something, how the freak would a BABY THAT WAS JUST BORN DESTROY A FREAKING VILLAGE, and she don't kow how the freak they believed that he was the REINCARNATION OF THE NINE TAILED BEAST. they just believe stupid rumors that couldn't be believable,like what the hell boy?
and the main reason why saya wanted to help him is because? that's so obvious what would you gain from a protagonist that is the reincarnation of indra?that has a plot armor?and a freaking 9 tailed beast sealed in him ??hmm?
saya walked towards the kids and yelled:"you little pieces of sh** get out of my way" saya yelled while acting childishly and pulling some killing intent towards the kids without knowing the four kids that were beating naruto heard that and looked behind them with anraged faces and what they saw was a beautiful girl with white silver hair and darkned red eyes, that would make the angels feel jealous of her beauty! , but at this moment they felt like they was going to die, a sense of danger rang in their heads like a lightning strike!!they started shivering from fear and then ran screaming without a break!
saya was confused to why they were screaming like that and at this moment she heard the system voice!
System|DING, congratulations host for gaining the skill: killing intent!|
saya was confused at first and than she felt so happy! killing intent is a really useful skill that could scare the oponents that are weaker than her! or even let them collapse from fear! it is just like the conqueror's haki! saya didn't think that she could gain a really useful skil just like that!
when saya was thinking about all of that she heard a voice that interrupted her from her thoughts!
blond haired boy:"umm...thank you for helping me..."
saya:"ah...uh..no problem kid! how could i just watch when someone needs my help!" saya was throwing some bullsh**
saya:"uhm, by the way i am saya nice to meet you! what's your name?"she wouldn't say hello protagonist naruto i really wanna be a friend with you, now would she?
the blonde haired boy was stunned for a moment then said:"my name is naruto! and i will be the hokage, dattebayo!"
saya:"i believe you'll be! wanna be friends!?"said saya with a happy tone
naruto was stunned for a while then started crying
saya"im sorry if i said something bad or .....you don't wanna be my friend?!" saya said with a sad face , now she wasn't acting she really felt pity towards naruto and how bad he wanted a friend!
naruto:"no!!i really wanna be a friend with you!! nice to meet you saya-chan!"naruto said with a happy tone while wiping his tears
saya felt somewhat awkward then said:" hey naruto wanna play together?"
naruto:"yeah sure!" naruto agreed wih a big smie on his face
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*time skip 5 years later*
in the last 5 years saya would play with naruto at morning and train at night she was training with the leaf exercice to have better control of her chakra and after 1 year of training her chakra control (she had a lot of chakra and it wasn't easy to control it,)she perfected it! and now she also knows how to fight and walk on water and trees. she also increased her dexterity and her combat power by throwing shurikens and fighting some chakra beasts in the forest and of course she did some missions to gain EXP and level up,and because of that she got new skills too.
today is going to be her first day at the academy ,naruto was able to entre the academy at the age of 6 cause he is the Jinchūriki and everybody else would entre at the age of 8 (there are some exceptions though) Saya was kinda excited cause she would be able see some famous naruto-verse characters ,if she was in there class though. saya was ready to leave the orphanage and go to the academy she already ate her breakfast and prepared herself. while she was going to the academy she said:"Status"
System|status:
level:1
race:dragon
Title: THE MONSTERS SLAYER
HP:25000/25000
chakra:10000000000000(5 tailed beast amount of chakra,no one can sense it only if the host wanted to )
chakra control: 100%
dexterity: 160
vitality: 370
defence:300
combat power:100
afinitty: fire,space,time
skills: MAP(show the direction to any place, person the user want to go to), TELEPORT (teleport to any place that the user want but have to be within 30 km,can be upgraded) ,SHURIKEN MASTERY(perfection(100%),STEALTH(perfection :100%) ,INSTANTE MASTERY(gained by doing a special mission), NECROMANCE(user will be able to summon any dead( human/monster/...) that is weaker than him/her ,can only summon 1 dead right now,can be upgraded, gained by doing some experiments on the corpses of beasts) ,SPACE DIMENSION(user can go to other dimension and also can bring anyone he want with him at will, it's like kamui ),KILLING INTENT,SHADOW CLONE JUTSU
race skills: fly (B), dragon roar(D, when leveled up it could make someone that is more weaker then the mc collapse or shiver from fear), dragon eyes(,let the user see from long distances,let the user see with slow motion,let the user see some moments of the future,can slow time or make it faster -limited )
devil fruit: none
equipments: none
stat points:60|
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11~20 low genin
21~45 mid genin
46~70 high genin
71~89 low chunin
90~111 mid chunin
112~130 high chunin
131~147 special jonin
148~165 low jonin
166~189 mid jonin
190~220 high jonin
221~280 elite jonin
281~330 low kage
331~360 mid kage
361~430 super kage
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sorry for grammer mistakes :p