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Chapter 2 - read this

First, welcome with me with this novel.

I'm not a big fan of Naruto, but they made it possible to build a story from a phantom with its incorporation into the qi system in the Chinese novel.

In terms of the character of the hero, he will be independent, meaning that he will not worship Jiraiya and will not need the strength of the Kyuubi, because in my opinion it is just an external support.  Namkazi or Kushina. 

About the heroine, she will be the only one you know, Hinata.

On the energy system or chi, it begins with purifying the body, intensifying the qi, building the foundation, etc.

Each floor has ten levels.

As the novel progresses, I will explain more.

The hero wouldn't be loyal to Konoha and he wouldn't be her enemy either. After all, Naruto's kid wasn't very good.

That's it .  I am more interested in your comments to improve the quality of writing, so do not give me your opinion or criticism, as I am a reader like you before I write it.

Thank you 🙏👋👋👋