Giana_San

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This novel is pretty good so far. The story does a good job at the start at captivating readers. As well as keeping readers engaged. The most important scenes are greatly written. (NO SPOILERS!) Characters are well written too. They have many personalities that don't seem to overlap. As well as their abilities. That is total uniqueness! Anyways if you're a fan of demon slaying this would be a great novel for you.

Good captivating start for a Novel, characters are well written and the premise of the world is introduced in a very amazing fashion.

Writing Quality - Very well written for a novice writer, you can see the improvement in quality as the story progresses.

Story Development - Story develops at a decent pace even if it has slowed down slightly. I am writing this at chapter 16 so will see how the content shapes as the story continues.

Character Design - Characters are well designed and each has unique personalities. I am currently also not seeing a lot typical tropes you see in most stories which is very nice and fresh to read.

World Background - We got a very amazing introduction to the world in the first few chapters. I do however think it would be great to read more about some of the newer areas as the main cast interacts with the world, just a bit more in depth world building would make a big change.

I'm just simply hooked! The characters are soo new and fresh. . . I mean at first it kinda Gave me demon slayer vibes but then it went to something totally different!
I would just say, teach me how to design character sensei? it's written soo well and the world background too! 
So, well I saved it to library long ago but today only I got the chance to read, and once I started, I didn't knew I was already reading the latest chapter! 
Keep up the great work author, waiting for more [img=recommend]

The writing is detailed and I'm quite interested in how the story will develop. Development and the background were not there yet, but the story has a lot of potential and I'm interested in how it will develop.

I'll be honest with you, the story is quite great so far, the comedy aspect is not out of place and the start is a banger. My only complaint is the information dumping, maybe you could tone down a bit your word count for each chapter and partition them to increase your chapter count while decreasing the overwhelming information especially in the prologue? You could explain the power and ranking system as the story goes on, aside from that, I have nothing more to add. SAVED TO LIBRARY... good job author san

beautiful, you don't seem like a novice writer, this is truly beautiful,I have read other novels like this, but I feel like the gore in the novel makes it seem less cliche, the overall plot is good, the character description is Wonderful. can't wait for your next update

I never read a similar novel before so this is a first of a kind for me, but it really delivered.
The writing style and the plot are both amazing and I really enjoy the author comments at the end of every chapter :)

This is a very nice book from the author, being the first book I think it's great and I see a lot of potential in it if the author sticks around and focuses on writing every day.

What more can I say, the story background is okay, no more or fewer mistakes and it's captivating. Keep up author and don't slack off. 🌹

Good plot everything is well described
Some mistakes 

Good read

Good plot everything is well described
Some mistakes 

Good read

Good plot everything is well described
Some mistakes 

Good read

Loved the plot and really looking forward to more and I love to be a your reader I am really excited to read more chapters of your story thank you

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