Mr_Diode

Note this is a Fanfic of The original tbate series .

Arthur while exploring relictomb finds a strange portal and after entering the portal he finds a big room inside it.

While trying to figure out how to clear this round he finds a relic but passes out during the fight when hw wakes up he finds himself in past in his 8year old body.

Join the journey of Arthur travelling back to past and correcting his mistakes while also gaining more power.

.I opened my eyes remembering what happened before I passed out.I quickly got up and started to observe my surrounding and also searching for Caera.


"Huh!!" I let out a surprise reaction as i was laying on a large bed which seemed familiar then my gazed fall on my hands it was the same pale  hand but 


I quickly got up and ran toward a mirror  and saw myself then I turned my head and observed the surrounding.


"No ...no it can't be " I was in Elenoir back in time when I was around 8 years old.


It is honestly not bad. There are many spelling mistakes, but I like where it is going. Please, do not stop. I think this premise is really interesting.

Yes. The story is extremely good if I were to say so and I can already see it's potential in the chapters that are yet to come... and there is a good scope for plot and character development too... but one serious con I found that although the pacing is very well in the initial chapters it gets pretty messed up in the coming chapters... I hope you can kinda slow things down and not rush... other than that I didn't find any mistakes...also use grammarly to sort out ur errors yk

TBATE:Time Leap

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Chapter-00 Prologue