HeroOfWroughtIron

United States

this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

I hope that you will continue with this fanfic it is good idea it will be shame if it is drooped But i can't wait for battles                             

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I the Author shall give myself a Perfect Four and as always I hoep you the viewers enjoys yourselves while some moments can be a bit cringe the plot can be good though so please don’t judge to harshly ✌️

É uma boa premissa
Acho que poderia detalhar um pouco mais o ambiente, eu gosto da idéia dessa história.

Recomendo melhorar um pouco as lutas e ter uma separação melhor.

Adorei 

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