Hey guys, the new version is already here and has like 20 chapters already. I am updating the rest till the 30th chapters as soon as the editing goes and go back to the normal of a chapter a day.
As I mentioned before, there are a few changes I made, here's a list of them.
1. Addition of Epigraphs.
As I mentioned before, at the beginning of each chapter, I have added 1 of the 1000 questions as an epigraph. It helps me create the mystery better and gives some hint and foreshadow of the entire plot. If you have time, check them out.
3. More sensible characters
I clearly lacked something in other characters like Elinor, Yeriel, I tried to mend it to some portion. You don't need to read the chapters for this, it's unnecessary as it won't affect the plot.
Now here's what that would affect the plot.
Chapter 05: Healing
There is not much changed here, I only gave Ciara an interesting ability. Her ability lets her affect someone else's emotion to some portion. in this chapter, she used it on Scar and rebuke him.
Chapter 14: A tool
This is something you definitely need to read. This is the rework of the previous chapter 03: DISGRACE where Lily takes away Scar's ancestral sword. It was reworked into something different and something fun.
Chapter 15: Changes
This is an entirely new addition. You need to read it as well, and this chapter will be quite important in the latter plot.
The last change I will make is that I will introduce a conflict before Scar goes onto his little mission. It will be Chapter 28, I think.
Thank you. I really worked hard with my editor and proofreader to make the story better.
I will really appreciate it if you leave some good reviews, it really helps in the early period of the book. Don't judge it by the old standard, read the new version, the changes a little, and give your reviews.
Thank you.