So I'll tell you a little about my self, I'm just a new author that really never write anything in my life. well, are a gossiping about someone is kinda a write too? hehe dunno and don't care.
well the point is when I'm writing I feel happy and liberate that I can express something that I can't in the real world. even though sometimes I'm racking my brain on how to express what the character feel or what the character see, what the side character will do, or how the other scene besides talking, to express it in a words, overall I'm enjoy writing. and if not because a disaster befall me, or something like my laptop broke or other thing, I will still write and will try harder to finish this story (even though it's just in chapter 10) even though It's have many reader or not. (well of course i want many reader to read my work).
then for you my reader out there, because I'm a new writer, I still have many manyyyy things to learn. and just one of your feedback is really precious for me. because from it, I can still improve my writing style. and I can make my own character more alive.
because web novel didn't have a pooling system, I'm post it on another platform. It's name is scribble hub. I can make a pooling system there. so if I want to ask for your opinion you just fill the pooling and i can know what I'm lacking.
but don't freed my reader! I'm still more focus in here. my novel there just for pooling system only.
If you really want to help me, then just fill the pooling in link bellow :
https://www.scribblehub.com/read/389235-my-beloved-harem-are-descendants-of-devils-and-angels/chapter/389300/
https://www.scribblehub.com/read/389235-my-beloved-harem-are-descendants-of-devils-and-angels/chapter/389743/