Decided to make a new review after editing 150+ first chapters where I filtered out some content, fixed grammar to the best of my ability and tried making things more clear for any new readers starting the book. I've always felt it didn't make sense why some writers make huge mistakes but never go back to edit them but instead say things like grammar gets better after 100 chapters? Writing just to fill word count has ruined so many stories for me so I'm trying to avoid it, I recommend readers to comment in chapters or leave reviews if you ever encounter something bothersome. If it's a mistake I'll fix it and if it isn't then I'll be more clear with how I presented it should enough readers feel the same.
With that said let me give you a general idea of what this is
