Hello everyone, Author here! So I've been reading a lot of the reviews recently, and I do appreciate the constructive criticism you all have given me!
In currently working on the rewrite for chapter 2, I'll probably be finished with it later today or tomorrow, so stay tuned for that.
Also, expect these re-written chapters to have a lot more character and plot development, and I'm going to make Zach act more like a normal human being and not as generic as he was when I was rushing this story.
Now, the story will be a lot slower-paced and will have more POV's so everything isn't just about Zach. But I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing, so give me a bunch of criticism!
Anyway, thank you for all of the support this story has gotten, all of you have a great day!