Author's note.
Alright, i'm not blind or ignoring the criticism and feed back, nor am I going to shy away from it. First off, I'm not going to apologize for Venelana being in the harem, but I will apologize for how I went about it. I can accept that i made an oopsie in how i decided to add her. I could explain my mindset, give my reasoning, but at the end of the day, it just fell flat and came off as out of character for him. I get it, and I apologize. My kneejerk reaction was to rewrite a bunch of things, but cooler heads prevailed after the initial reaction. So here's where we're at, i'm going to leave it and treat it as a learning experience as new writer. I made a mistake, i'm sorry, I won't do it again in the future. It's not the first time i've made a mistake, nor is it going to be the last, but I'm happy that I don't keep on making the same mistakes as I go.
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Lewd Ahead Venelana Gremory
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Venelana leaned into the kiss, her tongue made its way past my lips where our tongues danced for a brief moment.
There was a second were we broke off and just processed that we had kissed. And I would admit, it felt exciting and did not want to stop.
I just accepted that I was a pervert at this point and didn't care to mentally debate with myself anymore. I was going to bang my grandmother and I was going to love every moment of it.
"I've been waiting for this~" She said as she reached down and started to undo my belt. Her hands expertly undid the latch, and unbuttoned my pants, reaching inside and withdrawing my cock. "Mmm, a good size." She admired, lightly running her hand up and down my length.
I reached over, taking one of her rather massive boobs into my hand, and gave it a squeeze. These had been teasing me for way too long and they were as heavenly as I thought they would be.
"I love having my tits being played with~" She smiled, before opening her mouth and lowered her head down onto my member.
I sucked in a breath of air as I felt myself pass through her lips, her tongue greeting my tip.
"Ooh." I breathed out, relaxing in my seat as her head began to bob up and down. She was very good at this, her tongue was hitting every one of my sensitive spots as her hand pumped up and down on my shaft.
I finally let go of her breast and reached behind her, she even shifted to give me better access. Her ass perked up in the air and I couldn't resist giving it a light slap.
"Hnn." She stopped her sucking, my cock popping out of her mouth as she looked up at me. "Your grandmother's been naughty~" She giggled before getting back to work, shaking her ass, inviting me to continue.
I began balling up her dress, slowing pulling it up over her hips. Slowly, her big round ass was revealed, those perfect cheeks hidden behind some black lace panties. I couldn't help but take a handful into my hand before giving her another crisp slap.
Venelana didn't stop her motions, taking me into her mouth with practiced ease. Only after a few more moments, did she stop again and shift in her spot, wiggling out of my grasp and stood up.
She looked at me coquettishly, the straps of her dress slowly moving down her arms before the entire dress fell down onto the floor. She stepped forward, her bare breasts on full display, and her nipples nice and perky
"No bra?" I questioned.
"I wanted you to look at my tits." She pushed them up, letting them fall down with a nice bounce. "It's been awhile since I've seen Yasaka in person, but I think mine might be just a tad bigger." She smiled, moving to her knees right between my legs. "But to be sure, lets test it."
She took her breasts into her hands and pushed them around my cock until I was fully buried between her cleavage.
I practically melted between her boobs as she started massaging me with them. I unconsciously started to move my hips, Venelana matching my movements and pumped me thoroughly with those massive melons.
"Fuck." I groaned out, steadying myself by grabbing her shoulders.
She took that as a cue to go faster and I could feel my orgasm building up inside of me with my breathing hitching.
"Cum for your grandmother." She cooed as the first spurt burst out from her cleavage. She didn't stop, continuously pumping along my cock,with more of my seed spraying out onto her breasts and even a little bit landing on her face. "Oh my, look at this mess." She finally stop, letting her giant tits fall down. "Did you enjoy your grandmother's boobjob that much?" She licked her fingers, never breaking eye contact.
"Did you enjoy tasting your grandson's cock?" I replied, seeing how she was noticeably getting off on the idea of us being related if the growing wet spot on her panties was any indication.
"Absolutely." She didn't miss a beat, opening her mouth as she leaned back down and took me back in, seemingly to clean me off. Her eyes met mine for a moment before she went all the way down. "Gluughk". She held her new position, unmoving. My fingers made their way into her hair, grabbing hold and keeping her there. I began to thrust at my own pace, enjoying the feeling of her throat contorting around me.
"Haaah." She let out panted breaths, my cock springing free. "It's been too long since I've had a nice stiff cock." She pulled back and I let go, and she began tugging on my cock lightly to keep me erect before standing up again and moving to the point where she was hovering over my member. "Are you ready to really step past that line?" She pulled her panties to the side, showing her very wet pussy.
I could feel my dick twitch in anticipation. "I've already come this far, I don't think I could stop even if I wanted." I breathed out, taking hold of her hips as I helped guide her down.
"Oooh, that's good." She let out a soft moan as her hips lowered, my cock spreading and sliding into her. Inch by inch my member disappeared inside of my Grandmother. "I want to savor this." She sighed in content, her ass resting completely against my legs, my cock fully sheathed inside her cunt.
"Tight…" I couldn't help but mutter. I could feel her folds squeezing me from every direction.
"You've never had a Devil before." She slowly moved up and went back down. "We're made to be fucked, to make sure we drain every last bit out of these balls...Hnn." She picked up the pace letting out a soft moan. "This pussy of mine is going to wring you dry."
I could only groan some more as she bounced up and down on my cock, I matched each of my thrusts to her timing. The sound of flesh slapping spread throughout the empty house, followed shortly by moans that were quickly picking up in intensity.
"Ahhh~" Venelana's breasts bounced right in my face, her hands on my shoulders to support herself. "This Cock…..mmm….is perfect, it's hitting me just right."
I pushed my face between her tits as she slammed down once more and stopped, I felt her back arch a little and her breathing pick up. "Ooh….." She let out a throaty moan, her hips slowly rocking back and forth and clamped down hard. "Hnnn…..Ahhh." She melted in my embrace, a look of ecstasy overcoming her.
"You made me cum" She said quietly, her hips started to move again. "It's been far too long." She added, lifting her ass up and fully dropping back down. "Now I want your second load right into my womb."
I grabbed hold of her rear, my fingers sinking into that soft flesh of hers as they bounced up and down on my member.
"We….Hnn….Devils don't use contraceptives." She moaned out. "I might…..ah….get pregnant." She whispered into my ear. "I'll have to tell everyone that my grandson took his big fat cock and.. mmm…..relentlessly fucked my tight cunt, pumping his warm cum right into me."
That was enough to push me over the edge. I increased my own pace, slamming into her with everything I had. I lasted only seconds longer, and my second organism came with full force as I burst into her deepest parts. My Seed flooded inside of her with each additional thrust of my hips.
We finally came to a rest, both breathing heavily, sweaty bodies pressed against one another.
Venelana started giggled softly, her head resting on my shoulder. "I wasn't lying, what do you think will happen if I get pregnant? The odds are low, but there's still a chance. You were so rough there, do you really want me to bare my grandson's baby?"
"Ooh." Her head perked up, a visible shudder ran through her body. "Someone just got nice and hard again~"
"You're the one who put those ideas in my head." I growled sitting up, her legs quickly wrapping around me as I held her tight in my arms never separating. "Don't worry, I'll do my best to breed my grandmother."
Maybe I got too caught up in the moment, but I couldn't focus on that wayward thought. I was too enamored with my grandmother who was doing all she could to continue wring me dry, even as I carried her upstairs and into my bedroom.
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Lewd Over
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It was once again strange to find myself in this particular situation.
I was cuddling with my grandmother after having sex with her. There was no sugarcoating it, I banged her as many times as we could physically achieve in the time frame available to us. And she wouldn't lose out in voraciousness even against Scáthach.
My grandmother was a very lustful woman who had apparently been very pent up.
Regardless, I felt peaceful with my head buried in her chest as we laid on the bed.
Unfortunately, post nut clarity came rolling in and I realized I may have jumped the gun a little bit. "We need to talk…" I mumbled from between those big breasts before finally freeing myself to look her in the eyes.
"I suppose we do." She hummed, running her fingers through my hair.
"I like you." I admitted with a simple statement.
Venelana giggled. "And hearing you say that makes me feel all warm inside." She smiled brightly. "Or maybe that's all the semen you let out inside of me."
I couldn't help but blush at that, which took me be surprised. However, it still brought a smile to my face. "And I enjoy your sense of humor." I decided to continue, reaching for her hand, taking it in mine. "I didn't expect this to happen. Yeah I thought you were attractive and maybe looked a little too long than I should have when were first met, but I didn't harbor those thoughts before. Even after meeting, I still didn't particularly have these thoughts, but as we started talking, I realized there was more about you that piqued my interest and it just went from there."
"You're making me feel like a young girl again." Her expression softened considerably. "I wasn't expecting something like this either."
"That's bullshit, you were wanting to get fucked right from the beginning." I deadpanned.
"I meant becoming Lovers, you silly boy." She flicked my forehead. "When I saw that look of yours when you were going to decline my advances, well, I can't say that my heart didn't flutter. Maybe I was a little jealous, at that moment I wanted to be more than just a roll in the sheets."
"Jealousy, really?" That seemed unlikely from this woman. She exuded a constant air of confidence.
"I never did tell you which sins I align with, did I?"
"You didn't…"
"I am a prideful woman. I take pride in my status as a Gremory and a Bael, regardless of my relationship with Zeo at this point. I take pride in my Son's accomplishments, even if we're having a rough patch due to everything that's been going on. Even Rias, I can't help but be proud of her, she's growing up to be a wonderful young woman, faults and all. I could keep going about all the small things to the big things, but I think you get the point."
"Pride then? I can relate, I can be rather proud of myself at points."
"And Lustful." She said almost absentmindedly. "But I doubt I need to give you any more examples of that~"
"My mind says no…."
"But I feel you start poking me again." She giggled.
"It's a natural reaction to a beautiful woman saying something so provocative." I huffed.
"This cute side of yours is hard to resist." She leaded forward, kissing my cheek. "But to get back on point, I felt my pride take a hit, admittedly. And I was understandably horny…..so I made a rash comment, however, I don't regret saying it."
"I guess not all relationships need to start from some point of romance." I sighed, leaning back onto my pillow. It's not how I wanted things of this nature to go. I felt like too many important things had been ignored. glossed over in my horny state of mind.
There was undeniably a spark between us. Sure, it got started with some sex and probably the incorrect reasons, but it's there all the same.
"If you're fine with it, then I'm fine with it." She just gave a warm smile.
"Since we're skipping many critical points, should we talk about expectations?" I offered, fully accepting of our strange relationship at this point. My grandmother was going to be my woman, and I had no regrets about that point.
And it was important to set boundaries or know what we need from each other if this was going to work out at all.
"Oh my, a young man showing me such concern." She sounded amused by the sentiment, with an undertone of warmness to her. "What I want….is for you to keep doing what you're doing. I want you to keep looking at me like that, with affection in your gaze. I want to feel it every time we meet. Is that something you can do for me, Wilhelm?"
"Yeah, that's something I can do." I leaned in myself, placing my lips against hers for a quick kiss.
"Good." She snuggled into my arms. "I miss being loved in that way." She added on quietly. "I don't expect that any time soon, but I want you to understand my desire. There are other things, but I think we can work through most of our quirks and oddities as we go. However, there's one thing, I will absolutely not forgive. One taboo that I will not accept and will end this relationship if it comes to that point."
That serious look on her face made me gulp, and I just nodded silently.
"Please, don't ever make it so I have to choose between you and my family. I know this isn't the most….normal of circumstances, but I'm asking you not to find trouble with them. You told me you didn't want to see them, and I'll respect your decision."
"So you won't ever try to force us to be together, to meet or anything like that?" I questioned, as it was an important topic to cover. "Just as you say you don't want me to come between you and them by my hand, I don't…..want to be forced to interact with them due to our relationship."
"That's completely fair." She nodded.
Just more things that we should've been talked about before fucking.
"So….where do we go from here?" I was honestly a bit…lost.
"That's a good question, I can honestly say I've never been in this situation before." She laid back, her head resting against mine. "We need a way to keep in touch. I assume you have a phone that connects to the Devil Net?"
"Yeah, exchange numbers?"
"Mmm, I'll give you mine when I leave."
"Fair warning, I often go places where you won't be able to reach me." I wasn't quite ready to reveal my secrets yet. Some things just came in time, even if the whole process had been jumbled.
"How ambiguous" She laughed. "I assume there's more to it, but I won't press. Thank you for telling me."
"And now I need to go tell my other girls that my grandmother is my lover." I sighed.
"I can be there if you want?" She offered. " I believe I can soften the blow if they aren't….inclined towards the concept."
"No." I pursed my lips. "It's my mess, I'll clean it up. If I can't sit down and talk to them about things like this, then our relationship wasn't built on a solid foundation."
"I can't wait to meet them then. It's been so long since I've been part of a harem."
"That's right." I blinked in realization. "You were part of a harem before….you actually have experience with this."
"Oh yes, I was….the head?" She looked thoughtful. "If you want to use that terminology. I made sure Zeo's harem ran smoothly, and let me tell you, it wasn't an easy job."
"Really?" I tilt my head.
"Do….you not have any problems?"
"Not really?" I shook my head. "All my girls get along well, not to mention they all adore Kunou and dote on her. I haven't seen or heard anything negative…."
Venelana looked at me, mouth opening then closed again. "I don't know if you're just lucky or you somehow figured out the right things to do on your own."
"By your tone, I take it this is rare?"
"To have absolutely no problems between harem members, it is. There's always going to be tension or the like even if they all get along. But by the sounds of it, you really haven't had any issues." She sounded genuinely surprised.
"Maybe it's because all my girls are older?"
"Older, how so?"
"I believe you would be the…..second youngest, technically. Just right above Yasaka." I rubbed my chin, trying to think of their actual ages. Artoria was born in the 5th century, thereabouts. Technically, she was born before Venelana.
"Oh, so you have a type then." Venelana snorted, barely holding back a laugh.
"Shamelessly." I didn't deny it.
"I have many more questions now, but I suppose they'll have to wait until I meet your other harem members." Venelana let out a contented sigh, her head lowering back onto my shoulder. "Thank the Satans I don't have to deal with Zeo grabbing girls barely legal even of human standards anymore. He had a fetish for teaching younger girls all about sex."
"By younger…"
"Younger by our standards." She made sure to clarify. "Atleast adults, we're not that bad."
"You fucked your grandson." I pointed out.
"And I'm going to do it again." She grinned. "….later. I can only go so much and you have an absurd amount of stamina. I'm wondering if you have a harem by desire or need at this point. I do enjoy this ache between my legs after so long, but I do need some rest to get back into the groove of things."
"Well, you're not the first to say that." I smiled, thinking about how Scáthach said the exact same things. "However, should you be telling me about your…..husband's proclivities?"
"You can say Ex Husband if it's more comfortable." She kissed my cheek. "And believe me when I tell you, he would happily talk about them if you brought it up. Hell, he would give you a high five after finding out how I rocked your world."
"…..well then." I just blinked at that. "And rocked my world?" I quirked an eyebrow.
"Go ahead and deny it." She laughed.
"And I can't." It's not that the sex had been better than with my other girls, but certain differences did give rise to some intense feelings.
"Thought so." She pulled me in for a deep kiss, and I enjoyed the taste of my newest woman.
I didn't know what was going to happen with Venelana, but I was excited to find out. But I was truthful that I wasn't looking forward to explaining this to everyone else.
Oh well, I made my bed. I would be remiss to tell others not to sleep in theirs when I didn't do the same. Besides, I don't think any of my relationships would change based on this.
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