what hides in the void

let us start form before the story so you have some clue what's happening first of I am a new to this second this is a story of death if you met them in the book they most likely will die. the story starts with a tale older then well who knows but it gos like this "long before you or me when this town was but a dream things went bum in the night Cry's and screams always heard but never seen the settlers called this monster valley little did they know they where far from the truth in the shadows they cast and there vary houses they made lived something. something so Hungary and so tormented it only wanted to kill and fest on the people so it did. and so it keep doing to things changed and the dead turned into what they feared the monsters they hated they lived with every memory but still never had a clue what hide in the dark. the town never found never seen and never heard voids break." -tell me what you thought and anything I should fix thank you for giving me a chance -