Horseshit

After he slept at his comfy familiar bed he woke up noticing  he was in a different room.

Hello this is the author here, I am making this novel to try and improve my English and maybe also my story making skills. Right now I only have a rough direction of which this story will go. If you guys/gals can tell me the mistakes and what to improve, I really appreciate it. I welcome criticism that can help and improve my skills although I wish you would not be so rough in saying so :D. And by the way I shall also do the tradition of authors of rating my own novel with max stars.

Damn Coconuts

Table of contents

Volume 1 :Start

Chapter 1 - TEST