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Chapter 1 - DELETED-REMOVED

What would you want the writer to write in a reincarnated protagonist novel you are reading? Do you want your protagonist to have a very cautious personality and be in control of everything or do you want it to be mysterious where nor the writer or the reader knows the hidden schemes until writer decides to somehow fill the loop holes. Or maybe you want your protagonist to have a system that help not only him but also the writer to give instructions to protagonist and make the path towards being Overpowered more straight forward. Just do the quest or repeat an actions to increase the experience.

Now if somehow, miraculously, one of the scenarios can come true at a given point it will always left us with many 'what ifs'.

'If the did not follow this lady or path or if he had done ..' 'Why did the MC not activate his powers at that point when he could easily block or kill.. '

'Why did he not explore the powers properly like instead of cutting or attacking whole body if he just pierced the muscles at the back of his foot the enemy would not be able to stand no matter the will power' 'Why is there a gap when the protagonist is still growing after he wakes up and how can he only focus on learning language when he is still child instead of experimenting and getting information from his house or something by experiments'

These are all the questions that we come up with when slandering a novel but instead try writing one and you will know that there is only so much you can keep track of - be it world building or character development. Sometimes it's readers requests and sometimes authors selfish desires.

We, the readers , always accuse them of following clitche but we don't know how hard it is to restrain yourself from thinking life a normal person - normality being the way you have read ever since. If a person walks with 2 legs obviously he is following example of any other novel out there. What do you expect? Let the whole world be crawlers?

And so lost in my profound thinking of world of novel I was stuck by heavenly tribulation lightning descending our mortal world ignoring the the lightning rod and the roof which is insulator.

Mah!? ..Not really.

It was just that the electric circuit extension I used for freezer which was scraped between the door and the wall resulting in insulation material wearing off and copper wire exposed where like a stupid fool who never looks at where he is standing, I put my foot on it after coming out of the bed room towards the living room.

Like a magnet no matter how I tried I could not separate myself and like any scientific scenario my neurons died and basically brain is just bundle of neurones in fat.

Technically I died.

However this is where the bizarre thing happened. I was still somehow able to think and feel to some extent but my heart definitely stopped.

Well I think this approves one of the theory correct that a human remains conscious for some time after death.

And without any change I truly died after some time.

Wait..wait..wait.. this was what the story was supposed to follow but just like winning a lottery isnt impossible so my scenario should also be possible, not probable tho, and so what I saw before me reminded me of my soliloquy just before I died and so I kept my self normal under very abnormal conditions.

And yes the scene in front of me was just like any hero summoning novel where the biggest antagonist is the church instead of the demons.

But the only difference, if not the main difference was that it was no temple or Palace but fu*king space vacuum and instead of being in body of hero or sacrifices I was like a dimly lit white shinning ball surrounded by 6 humanoid looking beings in blinding white(as if I had eyes hah), pitch black - blacker than the space itself, royal red, fresh green, ocean blue and transparent - with somethings similar to cracks making his? outlines giving it very ominous aura.

Looking at them, the first thing that came to my mind were the 6 elements like any novel however wind was missing in my opinion and i guessed the transparent to be the space itself.

"Yay!! finally we have peaked into space time laws itself after 2 million years of efforts.

Don't lose focus at this point and quickly close the gap" Said the transparent one cheerfully and then scolded herself for losing focus.

Never believe the appearance indeed, I thought to myself.

"Huh .. finally... First time since the time itself I get to see anything like this.

Worth my time eventhough I was free to be honest.

Oh and don't you feel this ominous feeling coming from the crack" spoke the white figure as if talking to itself.

"Say red, he should be able to understand us nah?" said the fresh green color figure.

"Are you dumb? souls can understand each other. humph" said Royal red figure in arrogant tone clearing one of the questions in my minds as to who I was.

However the next moment 6 cracks simultaneously stuck the 6 figures at their hands that were stuck out like they were supplying something and according to my fiction knowledge it should be some kind of energy.

But the next scene left me utterly utterly dazed as they figures reduced to ashes of the same colour in very small quantities in their place when I expected them to just get injured of sort.

'Isn't it a little to fast pace and anticlimactic for events before they could properly summon me, I suppose, they got destroyed.

As if responding to my comment the crack reduced but I could felt that it was preparing for something so I ran towards the ashes.

More like I swam in Mercury and as I passed through the ashes instead of touching them they disappeared into me and made me harder to move as if telling me to learn about what I have properly first.

But to its dismay I outrightly ignored it and moved towards other with greater difficulties, disfficuly increasing every time, until I reached the last one and absorbed it.

'You want me to wait and them suddenly they are gone when I wake up like some fantasy novel. Nah .. spare me. The moment I absorbed it I knew it was in my soul as this is all I could make out after careful analysis of everythig and what the figures commented when I first arrived here' I thought while the them crack suddenly sucked me inside it as I predicted.

I was so fast that even in space I could feel some resistance and finally I was dragged like it wanted but I hit a wall and the whole suction force disappeared immediately.

The wall was transparent I could see Earth like shown in pictures of solar system in books and even beyond it.

At that moment I hypothesised that I could not go back to Earth because I consumed the powder which probably contained something similar to soul essence or powers.

As I wad stuck here anyway for the time being I started to digest the powder that I could still fell lingering inside of me.

The first one was transparent one. I saw many images of cracks - extending, bending, stretching, looping and many other forms of space manipulation? However the thing was after how who knew how long they finished but then started from beginning.

During the time I was not just watching it like a movie but many concepts started forming automatically into my mind. Like if there is huge bend in net - space time net I presume - then this creates gravity and if other elements get into it they form matter. How you can combine different parts of space by bending the same net and how you can slow the motion or more like time when you bend space and connect it with an anomaly which I think should be black hole.

And how there are white hole and black hole which are always in equilibrium and opposite to each other.

If one is disturbed then both collapse. Or how there is always matter in space and everywhere is energy of space itself and hard physical matter is just one form of it. And so many different theories started forming and many different theories started becoming false as the video? progressed. The whole moment was like an epiphany and my mind processing speed became tremendous after 50 to 60 times that even i became astonished how I could connect seemingly different points and analyse them parallel to each other. It was like doing multi calculations at same time and accurately on top of it.

However I knew that all the things that I comprehended were nothing to the total information provided and I had a hunch that I needed to completely understand every aspects to stop this video?.

And so when the video started again I concentrated fully from start and carried on like no tomorrow.

Unknown to me the time I spend comprehending time and space itself finally came to end. Ending my miserable time where I could make nothing to many things but video still looped and looped without end. And after many times I would get one point and not the other but now finally I could even pass space theory test even if I go to end of future world itself where all space time is understood.

When I opened my eyes? I saw that Earth had moved from its previous place to opposite side indicating that half a year had passed but I knew better.

After comparing the tilt from my memory and tilt now I knew 14 years had passed. I guess the space knowledge became my second or maybe first nature.

However, ignoring my momentarily enjoyment the next powder of colour white became dominant and so the loop started and I knew from start that I had to comprehend more quickly but unlike my expectations there were just shades of white and I knew some of time manipulation was involved from my space knowledge but I could not understand a thing but just like before I started making conjectures and theories and after same cycle I somehow in how knows how much time completely understood the light element and just like I was expecting video? ended.

I knew that it was going to long with all the elements still uncomprehended but I knew it would be worth it with all the knowledge and any question I had would get answered.

I saw Earth and knew that 4 more years had passed but using the current knowledge I knew that if I make one correction to my constant then approximately 18.67829377393948849939783992870238381038838849010387493010028764378292001087366378290101009283837654432133445556277820202020398746477729000000198736388 years had passed.

And then as expected Royal red color became dominant in my shining semi transparent 'soul' form.

And so the whole process stopped after all six elements had merged with me making my soul shine like gold and still having black lustrous shine at edges mixed with green shade as it move in. Additionally my soul size was even larger if I compare to the figures I saw before.

And looking at at Earth I knew approximately 23.748100377748810087477739382910003864788100298477478829910...1005884899100488848810020995....1995009583719 years had passed since the first one.

However one thing I concluded after each every loop of soul identification memory - I started calling it instead of video because they really weren't videos- that I needed to absorb energy which I called dark energy, as it has similar concept as I studied back on Earth , to manipulate the natural phenomenon.

And so accordingly without wasting a second I made my self like the this energy by balancing the 'elemental law souls' inside which allowed me to blend my soul signature so that no resistance would be there, unlike any other souls, when I absorb dark energy.

And so I drifted while feeling the soothing calmness and the moment I opened my 'eyes' I saw no Earth but only me in endless darkness and distant stars in space while having a humanoid form but if I compare myself with the figures I saw before, who were millions time larger then milkyway galaxy, I was six hundred time larger but my shape was like fluid with no fixed shape.

Next moment a small hole similar to before appeared and I knew that if I wanted I could resist but I did not want to stay in this nothingness.

I started sucking me inside bit due to my large size I was not effected and so I reduced my self by condensing myself to same size and jumped inside.

I felt a same wall as before but I tore inside from crack but then I abruptly lost my 'conscious'.

Next moment I felt as if I had physical body which was being slapped on .... my butt!?

So unconsciously I started crying and I heard someone speaking in relief in some other language.

I saw a women with dark brown hairs which were tied in bun and a pale face in the split second I opened my eyes but closed it again due to intense light.

But what I saw was everything upside down.

Next moment I was embraced by another "woman' with who I could feel my soul bond.

It wasn't my soul that was bonded but my majes..ahem.. soul was residing in a container which I could break but then I decided not to test it because the container was the brain. Anyway the brain had one link - which was getting weakened every second - connected to the woman which I presumed is my mother.

'I guess my elemental soul is still intact' I thought.

I knew that the woman was my mother and in the same split second after thinking of many scenarios I hypothesised that I have reincarnated into a new world and a fantasy type at that as I could feel an unknown type of energy in surroundings from the moment I started sensing accurately here.

I snuggled into the embrace of my mother to feel her warmth eventhough I could heat my self using the dark energy still abundant to extreme in me.

My whole baby body, covered in a silk cloth, melted into her arms as I felt a sense of security and loving unlike my previous like where I was an orphan.

I tried to look at her but she pressed my whole body and my head into her soft motherly blossom and just like the time after I completely comprehended an element my soul soothed and my weak arms and hands tried to touch her.

Her other hand caressed my head and supported my neck and head with her warm and tender hands.

It was unlike any feeling and like an eternal calm making me sleepy and so for the first time I slept without care, fully peacefully even in this absurd situation.

All the tension and stress from thinking continously, even though my brain allowed this much thinking, drifted away as I clenched her cloth with my tiny hands and lost conscious willingly.

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The time I opened my eyes I saw a woman's ... no my mother's face next to me with her body facing me and her arm around my small body without exerting any weight on my body.

Due some kind of weak soul bond I felt relief from this situation.

I observed her fairy like smooth bright face with symmetrical nose and slightly pinkish lips and long black eyelashes. Her black hairs with slight shade of light brown made her face attractive even without the soul bond or the small sunlight peeking from the window on my left of peripheral vision.

After staring at her sleeping face and feeling her slowly rising and falling chest against me indicating that she is in deep sleep I closed my eyes to figure out the whole situation.

I closed my eyes and observed my soul which was still in condensed form and still the same filled with dark energy to an unimaginable amount.

'So I can still use the dark energy from my soul' I thought in relief as this was my main issue.

'Now secondly, after analysing everything I gathered and my new soul bond I can confidently say that I am in a fantasy novel and have successfully transmigrated or maybe reincarnated or possessed a child body.

Now that I think I can guess this is reincarnation as I was unconscious for about 9 months but if I actively wanted I could have stopped the whole process.

And finally, I can't feel dark energy in the surroundings instead some kind of unknown energy. But thankfully if I want dark energy I just need to open spatial path to outer space for it or go there myself as space itself cannot exist without it.' I brainstormed to get everything straight.

After creating a dimensional space outside of this space time I transfered a chunk of this energy and minupulated it my energy. It had similar properties to my dark energy but it opposed dark energy and after comparing it to all the fantasy novels I read, even when this whole comparing is irrational, I guessed that this world might be a cultivation world like mentioned in web novels but I still did not took my life as a game because I knew this would be the very mistake as there could be hidden powerhouses that could maybe rival me.

I sighed from my baby mouth and decided to observe the physical matter in the surroundings.

After scanning the area of 1000km with a thought I concluded that now I am in a fairly large town with suburbs and a city wall. There are other small villages at distance of 20km to 50km, forest at north-west and North, small desert at East and a large city 880km south from here. I used the height of my mother as 1.8m constant and then everything as relative to it as I don't know the SI units of this world and don't remember the exact measurements.

Then 200km south from here there is similar settlement villages and city in centre on all four sides and many other of better quality as moved east and south.

After 500km to northwest there is a mountain range with many buildings on top and similar situation as we go beyond.

Unsurprisingly there are large animals in the west side covered in endless forest just 80km from here.

The 3 villages between this village and forest are even smaller then ours.

To just north west there is a small village at around 80km and some hills.

Mapping the area I used life energy detection to find that about 500,000 people live in this village and the largest city I saw so far had 1.23 million people.

However the buildings on mountain had people all over the area unlike on mainland where there are forests and hills and had total of 2 million people.

Now, my house is like a big bangalore at the centre of city and have 2 floors. It's more like a castle seen in medieval castle pictures - not that I had seen any.

I sighed again after processing tremendous amounts of data within seconds.

I looked at the small boy probably of age 2 in next room with my space manipulation knowledge and ability and with the help of dark element I made an image of the small boy in my mind.

He has long dark blonde hairs with snow white baby skin wearing dark grey pants and white shirt.

I saw a weak soul bond of the boy and the mother so I deduced that he is my brother.

After looking at random details of the house and the area, time passed and my mother woke up with a painful voice which made me panicked as I didn't know what to do even with my fast processing brain but then I remembered that she just had gone through child birth so it might be normal.

She muttered something in a different language and after sighing she looked at me lovingly as I looked into her deep black eyes.

A small smile escaped her beautiful lips as she bended a bit and kissed my forehead and cheeks and tightened her embrace around me.

I unconsciously snuggled and purred with a small smile on my face like a baby would and thought that I need to observe outside to understand the language.

I manipulated light element and healed her pain instantly as I didn't want her to feel any pain.

My brother who was pretending to be sleeping till now got out of his bed and tip topped to my room from his room located opposite to this room.

I observed his actions and noticed a thick soul connection from his soul to something in the sky. I followed the line and instantly I was in front of the most beautiful woman I had seen in my entire life and more perfect than anything imaginable. But it seemed as if she was controlling something with the string - obviously my brother - and rage started to take over me but I calmed the very next millionth of the second. I called her with a dominating voice and projecting an image of my baby body as I thought it would really matter.

"What are you doing to him?" I asked making it seem like I was harmless but still excluding threatening aura.

She looked startled and instantly a golden crown formed on her head complementing her milk white skin and white robe like cloth. Her looks gave her typical image of a goddess but a beautiful mesmerising one.

"N-nothing. no no I was just instructing him to not use any mana to heal her mother as he haven't developed a big enough core" she replied.

That was more than what I asked for but still she didn't answer my main question.

"Can you control him?" I asked nicely now as I thought to be civilised instead of emotional scumbag.

"NO I am just giving instructions on his system alerts. I cannot talk with him." she answered again but her crown still remained bright which I thought was defence magic or something along those lines.

A million thoughts passed my mind and now I had rough idea of the situation but I wasn't fully sure. The word mana and system gave a lot to work with.

"Why are you connecting with him?" I asked again ignoring her questioning gaze as to what am I.

"I am to support him till he is 7. Then he will help to spread sustainability and reduce wars on Rolia - the mother planet" she replied softly with her soft lips.

"And who are you?" I asked the final question I had in my mind.

"Ahemm..ahem.. I AM THE GODDESS OF LIGHT, FERTILITY, MAGIC, TRUTH AND PURITY" she answered once again but this time in dominant and imposing voice and a hint of pride.

"Now, if you don't mind me asking, who are you?" she asked as she observed my projection with a perplexed gaze.

"Oh how rude of me. Let my introduce myself" I answered as if realising but actually I was thinking of what to answer and I didn't want to lie cause she might be able to detect this.

"I am brother of the boy you are observing and I haven't got a name yet, beautiful goddess" I replied in the nicest way possible and as I expected she was thrown off topic by my direct compliment as I suspect she never got face to face compliment.

But she maintained her composure and asked "How can you be a mortal?" in composed tone but surprise visible on her face. "Are you a God?" she finally asked.

"Hmm kind of in a sense but am still a mortal when compared to your beauty I replied" I replied trying to change the topic even I knew that I sounded ridiculous in my child body.

"Anyway I don't mind as long as you don't harm him. Hmm but is he really from this world?" I finally asked masking my voice with dark suppressing energy and light of purity so I don't seem like an enemy when pressuring her.

"H-he is n-not from.. " she tried to speak but I think the pressure was greater than I thought evident from her flickering golden crown.

I stopped the pressure and now fully understood one thing.

Eventhough she is in space she is surrounded by bubble which is not allowing any dark energy in but just mana so just like Rolia plane she is also negatively affected by dark energy. I decided to experiment more when I get back on Rolia and now focus on her.

I asked her few more questions and this time she didn't ask anything back. I think it's because she is unsure of what I am.

So after listing to her, I went over what she said in my mind. According to her she is some ethereal being what need mana to live and mana is created by physical matter naturally but only a small amount. But a plane where living being live more mana is produced overall even if not at the same place. And reason for summoning someone was that he was 'good' soul who would supposedly stop wars and bloodshed and lead the world to peaceful so more life can be sustained and more mana produced. Furthermore there are two more realm which unsurprisingly are angelic place and demonic plane. And no, Demon is just a name and is controlled by her friend Demon God and angelic plain by multiple other gods as its the most abundant in mana.

At last after processing all this I looked one more time at her perfect face and decided to leave eventhough no time should have passed as I accelerated the space around her bubble by connecting it with junction between black hole and white hole I temporally made.

But after thinking for a second I sent her my soul link of brain cover which looked weak and told her to respond in case I ever need her help - which I doubted I would need - but mainly so I can ask her question and keep myself busy and maybe start a rela..ahem nothing just casual chat.

And finally I descended back to my body.

I heard my halted steps as he was close to the room.

"Please let him come in Goddess of Lif.." I said using my soul link but she cut me in as if embarrassed "Call me Angelica, other gods me that."

"oh yea Angelica can you let him in. I have already healed mother" I sent a mental note using soul link.

"Mhmm" she replied in her soft voice like a soothing melody using soul link.

I observed the boy with pitch black silky hairs which were in disorder as if he had a wrestling, as he opened and closed the door quietly as he entered the room.