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Ashlani was hunting keelish, a large bipedal reptile commonly seen as a pest, near his home village when he was betrayed by one he thought was his friend, which led to him being killed by the keelish he was trying to hunt. Shortly thereafter, he found himself reborn as a keelish spawn himself, and next thing he knew, he heard a voice, welcoming him to his new life. Ashlani was hatching as an ordinary keelish spawn himself, but was offered the opportunity to evolve from just a normal keelish into an assortment of superior ones. So begins Ashlani's new life, and, his pursuit of vengeance!

This is me reattempting something I tried to write on tapas a couple of years ago. I’m going to try to be consistent on updates, but the whole “day job” thing gets in the way sometimes.

<p>Happy New Year! The reimagining/reworking of this novel has now been launched! It is currently (might change, dunno how I feel about it) titled as Awakening Evolution (Ashlani's Reincarnation redone). Imma try to link it below, but linking on Webnovel can be finicky. If it isn't showing here, it'll show up on Royal Road. Thank you so much for your patience, if you still care about this!</p>

<p>https://www.webnovel.com/book/awakening-evolution-(ashlani's-reincarnation-redone)_28403161808370305</p>

One of the best reincarnation stories I have read so far on this site. Realistic MC mindset wise.

Only question I personally have is how exactly his new race looks. I imagined them as somwhat raptor like. Is that correct?

Writing: top-notch, very clear and descriptive, very little to no spelling issues.
Updates: recently switched to daily updates and being honest I set my alarm clock to wake me up to be able to enjoy a new chapter first thing in the morning. 
Story: awesome, clear goal in mind, interesting developments, exciting fight scenes, addictive "kingdom building" even if for now, it's only about a small part of the swarm, everything one can look for in that type of novel.
Character: again amazing, slowly accepts the change and embraces it, is not plagued as 80% of others on this site with the change-back-to-human-at-all-cost syndrome, he grows into his new role and does not start harem first chance he gets. 5/5 for me.
World: very interesting and deep, while we still haven't seen much of it as it's currently nest-focused, what we have seen makes one curious and wanting more.
One thing I'd like to know is how keelish species look, while there are descriptions some sort of quick art would be awesome because while I assume that keelish looks just like a green raptor, what makes khatif immodest without covering his/her body (chapter 76), I would assume they are still reptiles, just a bit more upright. What does true Keel look like, descriptions are ok, but imagination works differently for every person?

Unfortunate thing, just cartoon characters, there is no brutality or deep characters, the hero is sensitive and emotional like the little sister, although he became a monster and his clan as well that their behavior is the opposite like a group of cute cats love each other and try to eat some little mice, there was no need  To make the hero and his clan a group of monsters who act with morals, love and kindness

Shameless self-promotion here.

This is my first published novel, so I would be the first to admit that it is imperfect, but I think that it’s pretty good. Grammar is a pretty big deal for me, so I make sure that I keep punctuation and syntax pretty tight.

I hate having my time wasted, and don't want to waste yours either. I won't be padding my story with anything simply to fill the chapters or spaces.

The story starts to be more meaningful right around chapter 20, so if you aren’t invested by then, I don’t think you will be.

I love constructive criticism, so feel free to reach out!

Great character development and world building! Not to mention overall amazing writing?! What more could you ask for? 5/5 for me. I really can't wait to see where this goes.

This is one of the beast reincarnation novels there are!! I just have 1 how does the MC looks like? The rest is good!!
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Immaculate story, i have a few petty pet peeves that attempted to ruin the story for me HOWEVER after giving it a chance and reading all the chapters ive found myself enjoying this novel immensely!

Great work author! Easily one of the top stories on this site. If i had money to give you, I would 🙏🏾

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this book is really great principally for who like non-human mc 
Its easy to read and although most of the characters are simple, because they are animals, they have personality well developed and their interations.
And the cherry on top of the cake is the mc who we read adapting to the new way of live, his "system" and his evolutions that are really good and exiting

Worth reading. 
Story is still being fleshed out but it already looks good.

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I really like this novel. I believe it has huge potential. Reminds me of Alien Evolution System, and i love that novel. 
Here, this novel, is just starting, but already we have interesting interaction between characters. Growth of MC feels good. Now is time to start eating humans 

Love the story and how well its wrote.
Its not to fast to not get any details, but not to Slow so you get bored by it.

Looking forward to the next updated each time, your doing well wrote! [img=update][img=recommend]

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Five starts cuz I had a good laugh at this one: "Ashlani was hunting keelish, a large bipedal reptile commonly seen as a pest, near his home village when he was betrayed and killed by the keelish he was trying to hunt", umm how can you be betrayed by something you are hunting? This made my day and when you are hunting something do you think it won't fight back XD.

This is an early review ,the story it's pretty good , a balanced cool system , good  interaction and world building.
The fights and hunts put you in the right "flow" a rithm or tune if want.

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One of my favourite books ever. You can really understand the mc and everything is very strucrted and logical. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Ashlani’s Reincarnation

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