darklord9999

It's a story of some random neet/shut-in/otaku who is enjoying his life as it's now the pandemic 2020 and everyone just stays in their houses mostly and wouldn't leave them.
He just sleeps mostly and watches anime/manga/light novels and doesn't listen to his classes, they are too boring for him, but on a specific day he gets called by a mysterious person and all that he can hear is "###**##*#*hs" and some gibberish.

India

today is a holiday so what can our MC do now that he is lazy as a sloth he always likes to sleep or read novels and often does all-nighter playing games.

"sigh! good morning world, good night now" he murmurs to himself again closes his eyes, and falls into a deep slumber.

after an hour or so he heard some kinda ringtone that he was familiar with and got out of his bed in a gippy and went to his mobile phone and saw his favorite game had gotten a new update which thrilled him its name was "infinite" which is a survival game where players have to collect, build, fight, etc. the settings are similar to our world but here there is some unknown phenomenon that NPCs cannot see and our players who are known as the 'infinites' can only solve these problems some of these players work for these unknowns and some don't.

"here it is the newest update by the server yes I waited for an entire week for this update," says our MC with excitement (what should the MC's name be reader, tehe! author here)

while he starts playing this game he gets a call from an unknown number."tsk, who's calling let's just cut the call" While muttering this he cuts the call out of frustration and again focuses on the game as if he cannot or would not do anything until he completes the mission, as he is about to win against the final boss and complete the mission of the game he gets the call again which makes him feel as if God didn't want him to win or so, as this was an ultra-difficult mission to complete which only a few pro players could have been able to complete, he angrily picked up the call" who the fu#k are you"

who is this shitty bastard why is he continuously calling me while I am playing the game I cut the call once then he called me when I was about to complete this 'SSS MISSION' which is really hard to complete as it took me 15 hours of non-stop gaming to reach that point this bastard just called me during my final moment in which I was about to have my victory, in anger I picked up this shitty call and the first thing I said was, "who the fu#k are you" in anger but all I got was some weird noises from this unknown person.

"buzzzzzz------buzzzzzz-peeeb-boooooop" sound was coming from the call

which triggered me and I started cursing him in my cultured language and cut the call but his alien or so bas####d called me many more times and I couldn't bear it anymore o I just blocked him but I got called again by a different number thin time within a minute and before I could curse or do anything he said this in a mysterious tone which baffled me" you have a bad omen today this is the beginning of your journey nick" and cut the call.

and I was like"naniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii"(edit: what) and 'This was the beginning of my journey as a hero. 'hmm kinda like this delusion I guess, he said to himself as he was a full-fledged otaku in flesh and blood

This novel has a very good plot. The author clearly has a very creative and active imagination so his intentions for the novel are clear.

However, this novel is prematurely written and the author seems inexperienced. There are countless errors in the three chapters I've read so far. 

Capitalization errors are straight throughout, all sentences start with common letters and words that shouldn't be capitalized are capitalized. This frustrated me more than anything.

Grammar was off, completely off. Punctuation marks were either misused or not used at all. The story kind of flowed, but the wording was absolutely terrible. The novel itself lacked a proper structure and there was no room for development.

 In the first chapter, the author kept referring to the mc as well mc, I found it very annoying. The author also continuously skipped from first person point of view to third person point of view, which made everything very confusing. I found everything about this novel extremely confusing.

I recommend that the author read other novels of the same genre of his book, re-read his work, download and use Grammarly or Proofreader or get an editor.

Overall, this novel actually has potential but it's too rawly written. I hope the author can work on their craft and get better and better as they write. [img=recommend]

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infinite loop

Table of contents

Volume 1 :eternal loop begins.

Chapter 1 - 1st loop part (1)