prettygirl_93

Minakshi is a beautiful, kind-hearted, and hard-working young woman; who wants to achieve something in her life. Abhimanyu is a handsome, devil, workaholic, and stonehearted man; whose priority is his business.

what will happen when the two sides of the coin come close? Will there be a spark or a truth would separate them forever? Read out to know more

India

This is your author prettygirl_93. I am trying my luck by writing a short story. Though I do not know how short it should be I am giving it a chance.


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Dear author,

Your synopsis is intriguing, and the contrasting personalities of Minakshi and Abhimanyu provide a lot of potential for conflict and character development. I am interested in seeing how their interaction will unfold, and whether they will find a way to bridge their differences or be driven apart by them.

One suggestion I would make is to further flesh out the motivations and goals of both characters, as this will help readers to understand their actions and relate to them on a deeper level. Additionally, exploring the underlying reasons for Abhimanyu's stoneheartedness and workaholic tendencies could provide an opportunity for a more nuanced portrayal of his character.

Overall, I would encourage you to continue developing the story and characters, and to keep in mind that a strong plot is only as good as the characters that drive it forward. I look forward to seeing how this story unfolds and wish you the best of luck in your writing journey.

The synopsis and the first paragraph tells me I'm going to enjoy. Just added to my library. I will read soon and after that, my detailed review will be on the way.  

Organized and smooth pacing ~ The trend in english novels is hooking the audience earlier on which is great but i personally dont mind a slower start... You've just started keep at it! Good Luck!!

While this is not the type of novel I usually read, I liked it. There were errors in the grammar but nothing that ruined the experience too much. (But if possible, please find a proofreader.) 

Here's 5 stars coz why not. The starting really attracted me, feels like a perfect read for romance lovers (that is not me lol) but anyways recommended. [img=recommend]

Okay, so far it was a great read. It's like drinking a warm tea to heal the stomach. Although the wordings need to be fix but the author can improve it one day. Keep it up

It is a good story. I only read a view chapters, but overall all good, easy to read, and understand. Good luck ,Thor! 👍😊

[img=proud][img=proud][img=proud] I love it

After thoroughly reading all the chapters, I must express my sincere fascination with the story. The protagonist, Mc, is a humble girl who tirelessly supports her family, despite her naivety. Additionally, her adorableness adds to her charm. The writing style is exceptional, and the chosen setting complements the genre of the book splendidly. Congratulations to the author for a job well done!

Hello Author, 

I think the synopsis is great and brings the reader in. As for the story, even though I myself do not read many CEO novels I enjoyed it so far ! 

Keep it up !

To be honest i don't usually read this genre of novel , but i must say it's pretty good.
I liked the start though it seems a bit rushed(i do that too 😆).
Hope you keep up the good work!

THIS AN INTRIGUING STORY WITH A PERFECT PACE, THE WRITING STYLE MAY BE AS GOOD AS THE STORY BUT THAT DEOSN'T STOP ME FROM ENJOYING THE STORY. IT HAS GREAT POTENTIAL

This story is great. The plot is interesting and the style is way too awesome.
Simple and easy flowing. Well-done author. Keep it up.
Your book will be great

"Love or Truth" is a nice short story that follows the contrasting personalities of Minakshi and Abhimanyu as they navigate their relationship and the challenges that come with it. The story has potential for character development and conflict, the writing quality and character design are great. Could better with more description about the world background and more depth in character motivations and emotions. with this written style I could saw It as a short TV series.  

Story wise I think it is really good but a bit predictable. There is a nice flow but the grammar needs some work.
This has the potential for some intense drama.
The main thing lacking is just experience as a writer but you have got the skill for it, so I know as you keep on writing you are just going to get better and better.👍🏿✌🏿

I have read all the available chapters and would like to say that I am intrigued. Mc is a simple girl who is working hard to help her family. Although naive, she is ultra cute. Writing of the book is good and setting that is used fits for this kind of book very well. Good job author!

I read the chapters they are good. Looking at the story I think you are Indian.  Best of luck dear 😘😘🤭

I'm not really into this kind of genre. However, this story hooked me up from the start. Even though we are only a few chapters into the story I can confirm this story has great potential.

amazing story and good plot line, even if I don't really read novels of this settings but I liked it.

Truthfully this is far from my usual genre of choice but I decided to give it a review anyways!
So far the author has done a good job of creating a strong contrast between the female and male leads. Having characters that aren't afraid to be rude or dumb at times also helps keep the story refreshing and adds a sense of lightheartedness to the overall story.
I think this story has potential to grow into something very enjoyable as the author continues to improve their comfortability writing.

For advice, I noticed that when I searched your novel you don't have any tags. Tags are perhaps the best way for people to find novels similar to ones they already enjoy so I highly recommend you add some.

The second tip would be that in romance or non action stories, in general, a lot of the readers overall enjoyment comes from reading about the environment around the main lead. So I think if the author were to spend a little more time describing some of the little things in my detail it could help captivate readers even more.

Im far from a romance story expert, but i hope my review helps a bit!

Love or Truth

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - AUTHOR'S NOTE