To all my current readers, (New readers please ignore this)
I actually edited the whole book and made minor changes. Don't worry! These changes won't affect the plot.
The changes are:
1. I deleted some filler chapters like Theresa's character. She doesn't have any importance to the plot, so I deleted her. You know her if you read my book around 2021. If you don't, that's better.
2. I also deleted the chapter where the timeline was seven years after Ndulou got comatose. I think the jump was so sudden and irrelevant.
3. I also fixed the sequence of the scenes to lessen the confusion, so it would be easier to read.
4. I added some action to the chapters and improved blunt dialogues.
5. I edited some inconsistencies.
6. I deleted chapters with info-dumps.
7. You will see Magic ranking/academy at volume 3
Ranks from lower to higher: 1 Sparks, 2 Embers, 3 Flares, 4 Pre-Flames (Mage), 5 Flames, 6 Pre-Blaze, 7 Blaze (Master Mage), 8 Fiery (Arch Mage).
I'm still working on fixing the grammar and punctuation. Please give me more time for this. This is actually my first book, so I've got a lot of things to work on, but I'm confident by now it's better than its 2021 version.
If you have trouble looking for which chapter you were reading before the changes, please comment here and I will help you find the right chapter.
I am sorry for the inconvenience and I hope you enjoy reading the better version of FBTT.
Thank you!
MaryahLu
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