Guys I was thinking of re-editing the first 60 chapter of Naruto Secret world.
If you have read the first 60 chapters, then the quality of those chapters are not that high. So I was thinking of adding editing and also adding some new details. Comments your thoughts on any one of the two option you like.
1. Yes, you should edit and add new details to the first 60 chapters.
2. No,
Editing and rewriting will take some time. Because I am going to continue uploading chapters as usual. I will do the editing in my free time.
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One hand was holding boob while other hand was holding the ass. Finn currently felt like he was in heaven. Finn didn't wanted to do anything else except for taking these two girls. Earlier just refusing Rin almost took of his willpower
Finn wanted to take everything to the next level but then
"Finn..." Everything shattered like glass cracks.
Finn's body stopped like frozen statue. Finn slowly turned his head towards the source of the voice.
"Rin....." Finn doesn't know what to say in this situation. Finn then noticed that Tsunade and Kaguya's faces were face red and their breathing was ragged. Seeing both girls faces, Finn really wanted to jump and devour both of them right here. Except that Rin's presence stopped Finn from doing anything.
"What is Rin?" Finn said while slowly removing his both hands from Kaguya and Tsunade. Rin clearly saw what Finn's hands was doing but decided to ignore it.
"Finn, are you not going take a shower?" Rin said while sitting opposite to Finn.
"No, I already have taken a bath with Grayfia before."
Kaguya stood up and walked away. Even though she always maintained a cold expression in front of everyone, but in the current situation she was feeling extremely embarrassed.
"Where are you going?"
"Shower."
"She is embarrassed." Tsunade laughed and lazily hugged Finn and put her face on his chest.
"Came to think of it, Rin I never learned what powers you acquired after your transformation." Finn couldn't find the right to know more about Rin's new powers.
"Tomorrow I show you how strong I have become." Rin said with a proud look.
Finn was chatting with Tsunade and Rin.
While on Atlanta Continent, at Gremory Household.....
"Finn" The sunset is about to set and the sky is about to get dark. Rias opened the library door and walked inside.
Clone Finn and Grayfia noticed that Rias whole body was drenched in sweat. Rias clearly looked tired but she looked very excited.
"Yes. Do you need something from me Rias?" Asked the clone of Finn with a gentle smile on his face. Finn had cleaned everything so Rias or any outsider cannot tell what Grayfia and Finn had done here.
"Finn, if you have some free time can you please fight with me. You can use a clone of yours. I just want to know how much I have progressed in these 7 days of training." Rias was hoping to spend some alone with Finn.
"Sorry to disappoint you Rias but we cannot fight now."
"Why?" Rias asked with a disappointed look.
"Rias you're currently exhausted. And it's already getting time for dinner. We will fight tomorrow. Tonight rest properly because you will need to be at your best form to defeat me." Rias nodded.
"Finn, are you going to join us for dinner today?" Rias asked with lots of expectations and hope.
"I have an appointment today." Grayfia knew what Finn meant by saying appointment. Grayfia was also kind of thinking of meeting Finn's other girlfriends when she gets time. Grayfia was little nervous about the thought of meeting Finn's other girlfriends even though Finn assured her that Kaguya amd others would accept her.
Rias lowered her head in disappointment. Any fool can see that Rias was just trying to spend time with Finn.
"Grayfia, do you want to recommend any book that can help me win the rating game" After what happened to Finn, Grayfia also stopped looking at Rias. Grayfia shut herself with Finn and Rkas didn't felt like reading any book. But now thar everything had returned to normal at least from Rias point of view, Rias wanted to start reading again.
Grayfia thought for a moment and said. "At the second last section. All books there are about fighting strategies. You can choose any book from there." Rias nodded and grabbed Finn's hand.
"Help me choose which book will help me the most." Rias said before Finn could say anything. 'Does she wants to say something about what happened in the afternoon?' Finn thought and remembered how Rias had almost seduced Finn to ravage her.
At the back of the library, Both Rias and Finn walked quietly, neither said any words.
"Finn?" Rias suddenly called Finn. Finn turned around and looked at Rias.
"Yes....."
"I want you to promise me a reward if I win the rating game."
Finn "____"
"What? Why are you not saying anything?"
"Why should I reward you? I mean you're winning this whole with you hard work. If anything it's you who should reward me because I trained you for 3 days." Rias felt Finn was really being insensitive.
Rias walked up to Finn and wrapped her arms around his neck." Wha... Waht... What are you doing?"
"You clearly know what I am doing. If I win the rating game then let's go on a date."
"Are you perhaps trying to seduce your teacher and make him fall in love with you?" Finn asked with a playful smile.
"Who knows? But what you did this afternoon has awakened something unfamiliar inside of me. I can see it clearly why I felt so uncomfortable and restless when you were in coma. I want to confirm if what I feel for you is love or not." Rias put her index finger on his heart and said. Rias waa pretty embarrassed in this situation and couldn't look at his eyes.
"Fine, I promise I will take you to a date. At that time I will also tell a secret about me." Finn decided to tell Risa about his girlfriends. 'Hopefully telling her about my girlfriends will make Rias stop approaching me. Although it's hurt but this is the best for her. I already have enough girls. If I add more girls then I don't think I can give enough attention to everyone. I am sorry Rias.' Finn was apologizing to Rias in his heart while Rias became even more determined to win the rating game and know the secret.
Rias separately herself from Finn and looked around. "Finn, give your suggestions on the book I should read to prepare myself for the upcoming rating game."
"I think you should read this one."10 simple, yet effective tactics used in battles.". Rias took the book and felt very interested in the book.
"Thank you Finn. I am going now. Don't forget to came tomorrow. You have to fight me and test me." Rias used a teleportation spell and directly teleported to her bedroom.
Sigh!
"As time passes, I am getting Tangled with more and more girls. I have to make girls stay away from me and prevent them from falling in love with me. I already have 5 girlfriends although my relationship Tio hasn't reached the peak yet. Then there is Kurenai who is crazy about me.
Then there are girls who makes me feel complicated Nagahide, Echidna, Kushina. As for Konan and Pakura, even I am not sure. But I don't want anymore girls. Being too much greedy is very bad for health."
"I have to be careful and make sure to not neglect anyone from my group..... No harem."
[Master just imagining how many children you would have makes me very excited. Since you and your girlfriends are immortal who knows how big the Anderson family will be. I am sure you can even start your own clan in 100 years. Hahahaha!]
Finn" ____"
"I can't deny your words." Finn said as he walmed back to Grayfia.
"Where is Rias?" Grayfia asked seeing that Finn was coming back alone.
"She left using teleportation magic. Let's continue on our work." Finn sat next to Grayfia and started reading the old documents.
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