The revised and finished book is not this one but the other one on this app. This is an unedited version that will not be finished. If you go to my profile or just type the name you will see it. If you've read some of this and go to the other one you will have to start over because I changed a few major things to the story and now that it's completely and my second books first part is completed I can't change anything back. I'm sorry for the inconvenience and I hope you take the time to read it and review it.