I'm just editing my other novel from start to end of what i've posted so far.
gonna do the same for this novel as well and fix up a couple things as well so the story is a little more refined and detail oriented.
I'll tell you when to reread this bitch, otherwise you gonna cry like some sad hoe that certain things don't make sense.
anyway, i mean i want to explain certain technologies while building up certain characters that seem far too plain in my eyes.
this has come from reading a certain novel that blew my mind, and made me stop writing, as nothing was of the same quality and standard.
so buckle up bitches cause i'm about to refine this novel like those overly retarded overpowered MC's from a cultivation story.
any questions or specific points you wish to hear about, say it now or forever hold it in your butt.
fyi i might add new chapters in various parts of the story to explain the life of characters.
specifically i want to give each of the A.I's their own chapters, either exploring the Spatial Ark Star World or Earth itself.
similarly, Esmond's grandparents and the empire near to be explained to a greater extent, including the Tartarus Zone and the enemies throughout the Deep Space Anomaly.
certain members that spawn from the Spatial Ark Star World also deserve this, such as the Yautja, families from Game of Throne and even the humanoid alien species.