Demigod_of_All

Causality is influenced by how one event, process, state, or object contributes to the production of another event, process, state, or object where the cause is partly responsible for the effect, and the effect is partly dependent on the cause.
Sanix Wilson, a normal high schooler, one day meets a mysterious girl who calls herself the Protector of Time. She asked him to be her Time Paradox to solve the unnecessary causality.
To balance this unnecessary causality, the Time Travellers from the Time Travellers Agency of Krupticia are trained to prevent it from happening.
Will he help her in her mission or else his life will remain as it is now as a high schooler?
Note:- This artwork doesn't belong to me, and if anyone knows the artist of this work, please let me know and I'll credit them.

India

Hello Dear Readers, this is Author. I hope you all are enjoying the series. Due to some work, I can't able to write it daily. But don't worry. I'll try to do as much as I can. The Grammar is a bit shaky, I know. I'm trying to improve it. Maybe I'll take a break from 01 December to about 3 or 4 months because of my exam preparation. But worry not the series will continue after that and you'll get to know more about what will happen in Sanix's life as a Time Traveller. I'm working hard for you all. Hope you will get a better view of sci-fi. Thanks again for your support.

Alright... I've read only a few chapters, but I'm going to leave my honest review about this book

First off, Writing Quality: Grammar needs some work, although it's not too bad that I can't understand what the paragraph is trying to imply. Also, maybe it has already happened in the future chapter or not, try to differentiate thoughts 'hello' with speech "hello". It's sometimes confusing to read. 
Next are the descriptions. It's good, but storytelling-wise, I think it's better if you describe their looks as scenes come along, such as Alice's crimson eyes. Instead of encasing them inside a parentheses, try doing this, although, this is just a suggestion:
'The girl stared back, her crimson eyes shining brightly under the light of the sun.'
Something like that, it's just a suggestion, no need to follow it.

Stability of Updates: What can I say? The author still uploads, albeit it takes a while...

Story Development: Nice. Good flow, good pacing, nothing much to say here other than good job.

Character Design: It's good. MC is like a normal teenager who had this secret of the world given to him with a bonk on his head, and he reacts accordingly. MC love interest is also interesting to read, but none of them will triumph against MC little sister. To glory! Teasing-Machine!

World Background: It's already set up there, and not too much contradictions.

Overall: This is a good read, my only problem is with the writing quality, but I'm sure the author can improve on it. Best of luck, my fellow author!



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Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.

The grammar and writing definitely improve in the later chapters, but the viewers don't know that, so you should definitely revise the first few chapters to make it better. Other than that the I liked the whole sci-fi with romance thing. Keep going and good luck author.

I am giving this 5 stars for the author's creativity! I know it is not easy working on sci-fi novels since you always have to check the facts. Time traveling is a very interesting topic, and it is mixed with adventure in this story, making the readers want to know what will happen in the next chapters. As you write longer, I am sure you will get better even more. Good luck with this, author! ^^, 

Okay, I read up to chapter 10 in this. What really caught my attention and interest is the time travel and Emily. It's funny how she teases San. Although the grammar is a bit shaky, it doesn't keep you from enjoying the novel

Wow. Just wow. Time traveling is an interesting topic to write stories and the way you have written is super, super, super interesting. I am waiting to read more. 

Emily is already the hero of this story!
I thoroughly enjoyed her character and how she teases Sanix repeatedly. That was a great interaction that caught my attention in the first chapter and made me wonder what the the entire family was like.
the writing quality is a little shaky but it didn't disturb my experience, tho I wish it could be improved.
the story advancement is pretty good and I want to know what Vivacious' charcter really means to the story

(It says chapter 3 because o read up to chapter 3 on my phone but on my computer read to chapter 10)

This is a pretty good novel to say the least. The concept of the time protectors agency is great and it seems like a lot of thought has been put into this. My only main problem is the grammar. I gave it 3 stars for the writing quality because despite being mostly readable, the grammar can make it difficult to read at times. However, this does have a lot of potential and i cant wait to see how this novel fleshes out!

The Heir of God of Time