[Hey guys, the unknown guy here. I just wanted to tell you that this weekend, I was going through my story, and man, the later chapters look so rushed and bland. I mean, I can't help but facepalm reading this. So please tell me your honest opinions about it and I will try to make the story not bland and rushed at all.]
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We stared at the two vampires before us and they both were nobles and looked similar meaning they were twins. That is interesting.
"Oh I see, so this was where Akira was hiding huh?" the one with the green hair said getting in a laid-back stance. "You sure have some guts betraying father like this."
"I never worked for father so I don't know how you are implying that," she said in a monotone voice.