Good news to yous, I started the second chapter several years after the first!
That's right, it's been about 2 years since the chapter that you just now left. Isn't that crazy?
But anyways, heres how to keep your words interesting.
Never can I repeat a word too often. It impedes the flow unless it's purposeful,
Ex. The purple fire in the purple brick hearth in the purple stone room.
You also want to generally watch your flow. This isn't 9th grade homework with compound sentences, this is a professional art piece made by you,
Ex. A luxurious piece of art; one of gold and silver encrusted in a thousand fine diamonds and sitting upon the grandest mantle of the grandest hearth.
All in one sentence. BEAUTIFUL!
WIP