Masakidreamer09

Have you ever wondered if there are things out there unknown? Why, if someone you loved is the target of those unknown things. How can you protect someone when you yourself have doubts about your strength?
Rika is stuck between a battle that has gone on far too long. Can she muster up the will to make sure she shuts it down on behalf of the one she swore to protect?. What secrets hidden from her?.

India

The story is awesome. Characters are somewhat real and relating at some places. Quite slow moving but ya reading is enjoyable. Good job author. Waiting for updates.

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Though there are minor problems such as repeated use of words and some slightly confusing sentences it is overall readable. The story is good, and the characters are simplistic but real. I wouldn't pack the words like a big essay paragraph, so I think it would be a great improvement if you fix the text formatting! Good luck fellow Author!

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