Retsag

France

No More Fantasy is about to take an indefinitely long break

Thank you for following my stories for all this time

No More Fantasy will be back, someday

Welcome to No More Fantasy!
I hope you are enjoying reading meless and Sansoul bizarre adventure as much as I'm enjoying writing them (which means a lot).
I try to publish 2 or 3 chapters a week that are between 1500 and 2500 words. I can't give a precise release schedule, but chapters are released 2 or 3 days apart from one another.
I'm trying my best to make an interesting and compelling story, but if you have any recommendation/advice/ideas on how to make it better I would greatly appreciate if you were to share theme with me :]

If you want to contact me, please do so on twitter at: @Retsag99 or by joining the official NMF discords: discord.gg/5sDqHM57XG
Thank for reading and have a nice day :]
Sincerely Retsag99

Ps: Which character is your favorite? I just want to know.

I recommand reading, it is a good story, with funny chataters and cool places like the casino and the cathedrale Notre Dame des Paris!
(Im not good at English, sorry for the mistakes)

A good book, i enjoyed reading, love the wtiting style, love the characters in it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Well ! The plot is very fascinating.. The only minor problem is that you been shifting between past and present tense.. Just proofread before you publish! Overall, good work, Author! <3

Good work author, I enjoyed every chapter I read. The story development was great. The character design was awesome.
Good luck to talented author

Good story, and very funny characters make this an enjoying read. I love it a lot, I really do.                                                     

I must commend the author for trying something unique. This will be a honest review from me detailing what I think about the story.

Synopsis: Not a bad synopsis. I can't say it will captivate every reader but it sure will catch the attention of those interested in this genre. Princes, technology, magic, it's all an interesting concept.

Writing Quality: The grammar isn't unreadable. It's good compared to a lot of books on this website. However, I gave this a 4 because there were quite a few missing punctuation marks, run-on sentences, and incomplete words. At first, I was going to grant you the 5 since you stated that English isn't your first language but that's not the main issue as your grammar surpasses a lot of English speakers. I believe editing is your downfall here because the incomplete words aren't subject to grammar. I'd recommend reviewing your chapters and fixing those incomplete words.

Development: The book has decent pacing. You're thrown in without understanding much. But personally, it lacked a little flavor, which is fine because that was only at the starting chapters. I also liked the concept of having 2 MCs. That can be tricky to handle but if done well, you can ace it. 4.


Characters: Well, the prince seems the most energetic out of everyone. Great personality for the characters. No complaints there. However, the designs were a bit lacking imo. I usually don't mark for design unless the author decides to do designs. But your designs only included the clothes the characters were wearing and gave no physical reference. Of course, this could just be preference which is why I won't mark very hard for it. 4.

World Background: This is what the book lacks most, especially in the first chapter. I was trying so hard to imagine where the character was. You gave context clues that he was running through some sort of forest which is why he fell etc. But it still wasn't enough. There were a few more instances like this. Some done better than others. I gave this a 3 as I believe improvements could be made.

Overall: I hope you don't think I marked you too hard. I'm not saying your book is bad by any means. Not even close. I just believe there is room for improvement and that goes for every author inclusive of myself. Correct these minor issues and you'll have a story of gold. Don't give up author. Writing is difficult but persevere. I've been there but not giving up is the key. Good luck!

Okay, I'm going to say this, one word to describe this novel is AMAZING...
The plot is just...WOW, it's different in a unique way, not like the typical transmigration novel's I've read, although there are some grammar errors but it's not a little editing can't fix, in all keep up the good work author, I'm rooting for you🙌🙌🙌

I highly recommend reading this book!

The attention to detail and vivid story telling allows you to fully experience the story at hand and allows for a wonderful journey. You won't be disappointed!

NMF isn't just an web novel... It's a masterpiece, with perfectly written characters and plenty of backstory to understand the world context

I like it, your english is good and i like the addition of subtle humour in your writing, the story is good and the characters can be in a way improved through adding little details in their behavious to make them feel more 3d. With how many chapters youve got under your belt, im sure the writing quality improves drastically when comparing beginning to latest chapters 👍

The worlds of NMF (No More Fantasy) are as intriguing as they are complex and beautiful. The caracters are funny and attaching.
I would recomend this book to litterally anyone.
GO READ IT NOW.

Wow! Two characters from different worlds, this literally piqued my interest, not gonna lie. Other than that, it's my first time reading a book with '-' symbol in the beginning of the dialogues. And... adding this book in my collection so great job author👍🏻

Yep! Another good story, definitely enjoyed my time reading the first 3 chapters, i highly recommend, the author has done a good job telling us the general plot.

cool j'ai adoréeeeeeeeeeeeee j'avance pas vite mais c'est bien

Although this wasn't what I was looking for, I couldn't help but leave a shameless review. I've read some of the comments and it seems you genuinely try to improve and enjoy writing this story. Thus, I shall leave you with this. Farewell.


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No More Fantasy

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Volume 1 :No More Fantasy

Chapter 1 - Haiatus notice