Madyan_wani

Since the story is based on a real life person, I can sense the realistic character growth will be shown to us. Ayat, the FL of the story wants an adventurous life as she was being restricted from doing a few things (maybe for her own good.) I would love to see how her life will spicy up after joining the company and meeting the hero of the novel.
Best wishes, Wani.

I'm giving this a 5-star review for potential! Keep it up, author!!!!
A bit confusing sometimes but I think after a few small revisions to make it flow really nicely, it will all come together and could be a forefront teen novel.

Your story is great, it has a lot of potential just keep updating regularly, it has a few mistakes but that is normal in every book, i love the main heroine and i hope to get more chaps soon, keep up the good work and good luck,

Strong start to the story, certainly unexpected.
Writing is a bit lacking, there's a need to fix some terms instead of the whole structure. But there are moments where it took me time to adjust to the beginning of a scene, but that could just be me, so I'm not sure 😂.
Pacing-wise, it was a bit fast-paced at the beginning, which kinda worked in its favor, but overall, it's nice.
I like the main heroine's character and I wanna know what's more to her story.
Pretty solid, needs improvement, but I liked it. (｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ

RIP 2

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - unk own