"Once upon the time there's a women who's so brave to defeat the Second most evil Person. Her name is Shuo Yin. The person who use a evil demand from dead people who has hatred and revenge in their heart are 'Wei'. Yin defeat the Wei by using all her power and strength but unfortunately Yin has passed away while smiling to people who cheer her for the win.
She fell to the ground. Her brother ran towards her with worried face. Her brother hold her then her brother freeze in shock because her body are weak and her item got destroyed because the power item has turn from green to gray. Her grave is near the Fyre Mountain. Thats where Yin practice her martial arts and thats where she got her first item. Until now her brother couldn't accept that her death is just her item has turn gray easily. She is teenager wannabe. As an person who has unusual immortal power everyone respect her. End." Say daiz(15y/o)
"Woah that's so cool i wanna be like her too!" say Ace(7y/o) with amazed face
"Welp you should learn how to be brave Ace." Say daiz
"Hahaha you are such coward our little ace. Your name is a boy but you are a girl haha" say Ton(13y/o) while laughing out loud.
"Hmph" hump Ace and look away.
*Daiz smirk*
"What about me? My name almost sound like daisy. Hm?" Say daiz with curious.
"Uhh noo your name is so beautiful and good looking haha" say Ton with nervous laugh
Ace giggles.
"Its time to sleep our cutie ace" say daiz and peck Ace forehead.
Ton also peck her forehead as good night. They went to their room.
6 years later**
"Good morning brothers!!" Yell Ace(13y/o) at her brothers.
"WAKE UP!! WAKE UP!!" Yell Ace
The brothers wake up and get ready. Ace want to find a mountain that suit her to learn martial arts. She is one of Yin wannabe now.
"I'm so lazy.." say Ton while sigh
After an hour**
"OH, THIS IS IT!! BROTHER DAIZ WHAT IS THIS MOUNTAIN NAME?" Say Ace to Daiz
"Um I don't know but Yin make her own mountain name" say Daiz
Ace make understood face and start to boost straight to upper mountain and she's thinking of the name.
"What you gonna give this mountain name" say Ton
Ace ignore the question. Ton making upset face.
"Just think!" Say Daiz
Ace eyes become wide and smile til her ear.
"YES RÉNWÉI(artificial)!" Ace saying it proudly
Ton and Daiz give a confuse look.
"I say 'think' not 'artificial' ace" say Daiz
Ace look at them while whispering
**its okay**
"RÉNWÉI!!!!" scream ace with happiness
The brothers were confuse then they went back with flying swords. Ace shocked because she never saw one then Ace take the flying sword away from Ton.
"AH!" screaming Ton then fall to the ground
"WOAH i want to fly with this please" begging Ace wanted to try the flying sword.
Daiz approaches her and pat her head.
"You don't have to be good at any of what we good at, okay?" say Daiz
"B-but..i-i want..too" say Ace with kitten eye's
Ton rub his butt and take his swords back.
"You cannot! Lets go home or mom and dad worried" say Ton fiercely
Ace nod and follow them back home.
**At the palace**
"Mother father we're back!!" Say Ton and Daiz
"Welcome home my son's..where is Ace?" Say
Clan leader Fu
"She having talk with Mother" say Daiz
"Oh ok..have you guys eaten yet?" Say Clan leader Fu
Shake their head.
"Well servant Gu has make you some delicious meal" say Clan leader Fu
"REALLY?! thank you servant Gu" say Ton
"No problem young master fu ton" say Servant Gu
The brothers smile and eat their meals. While they eat Ton saw his father worried about something. Ton hit Daiz shoulder and point at their father. Daiz curious what his dad worried about.
"Father what are you worrying about?" Say Daiz to his father with curious and worried mix feeling.
"Haha..uh..n-nothing my son's I'm just worry about your little sister because she's just little and weak she keep forcing herself to do something hard." Say Clan leader Fu
Daiz and Ton look at his father and daze thinking about their little sister Ace with worry face.
**Ace**
"I told you to avoid my son's! But you still keep hanging out and play with them! This is my last warning brat." Say Lady Ye fiercely
"I-i d-didn't-" say Ace
"Liar!! Don't you ever let me see your face again. MAIDS!" say Lady Ye
"P-PLEASE!! I-i promise i would not get near them anymore I'm s-serious!!" Scream Ace
"Go" say Lady Ye to her maids
"M-MADAM!!" yell at Lady Ye while sobbing.
Lady Ye maids Whipping her leg and arm 70 times with long bamboo. Ace hold her pain and sobs.
**After 70 times**
"I want you to drink this so you will not have power like your Mother brat." say Madam Ye
"W-why.. can't i have power like my m-mother..?" Say Ace
Lady Ye approach to her and slap her face 3 times. Ace shocked and her mouth and nose bleed.
"Your mother is the worst person ever in my eyes..she RUIN MY WHOLE LIFE!! I WANT HER TO DIE BUT I CAN'T JUST BECAUSE MY PARENT REALLY LIKE HER!" say Madam Ye with hatred eyes
Ace look in her eyes with disgusted face.
"Just look at youself how can..your parent loves you.." say Ace to Madam Ye
"What did you say?!? You want more HUH!! Maids BURN THE ROCKS." say Madam Ye
"What shape would you like madam Ye?" Say one of her maids
"I would like a shape where her mother love to draw on her wall." Say Madam Ye
"H-huh..?" Confuse Ace.
"This shape she really really love because her crush and her draw this on a love rock in Mìngyùn Moutain. Well unfortunately she killed her crush because her crush is son of the Gao Clan. That's the best day I've been.." say Madam Ye
They burn the rock and stamp it on her stomach. Ace scream in pain and felt weak. Ace couldn't see the shape properly because her eyes couldn't open. Then, Madam Ye force Ace drink the "soup". Ace drink it and she fell asleep.
**Wake up**
"I'M SORRY I WON'T DO THAT AGAIN!" scream Ace in the middle of the night.
Ace look around her. She's still at the same place where she get torture but her arm weren't tied. She walk back to palace. When she arrived she didn't bother to go to her room which near her brothers room she went to her father.
"F-father.." Ace calling her Father
Her Father so shocked and he take her to the doctor.
"This is not a minor wound she has to get rest for a few days or not she not be able to be in this world anymore." Say the doctor
"What do you mean?! I only get hit and burn rock stamp and..soup.." say Ace
"What kind of soup? How its taste?" The doctor asking her.
"It taste burning and make my item weak" say Ace
The doctor and Clan leader Fu look at eachother and nod.