Hi, I'm new here, this story is originally from my wattpad: ins3cur3d3m0n
Anyway, I thought I'd make a story based off this out of my own original thought, considering I only like originality, updates will be momentarily, I just need to tell you the characters names and details. Also I need to explain a little bit about the World of Demetrius.
So for the World of Demetrius:
There are 6 demi's of Queen Demitria's that have been scattered among 6 of the regions. A group of teens have to go and search for those elements to cure the queens illness and save all of Demetrius. The regions names are: Alpecka, Omeago, Pronejio, Etechia, Nythinia, Gurengia, Galeleo, and Yuopia. The demi's are like the elements of harmony (my little pony reference), they are special abilities given to the certain person who achieves/qualifies in that ability.
There is 7 total headmasters/sensei's that weilded those abilities but after the regions got taken by the plague, those two elements were scattered. The other demi's were hidden away or lost due to certain tragedies in the tree regions. Queen Demitria has the seventh demi because it was passed onto her by her mother. Certain demi's are hereditary like Queen Demetrius's, if a certain demi holder is chosen by the queen herself then that is when it becomes hereditary.
The World of Demetrius is a gender neutral world, but the king is to be killed after the birth of their daughter or son. The tree regions each have laws of their own, and their own type of army of women. Each tree region also has its own technology which is why the demi's are the way they are. The sky-zipline's, that were mentioned, are portable or just usual ones like for transporting goods to certain regions.
Anyone in the military/army of every region, do not have a last name, they are only refered to as their 4 digit numbering that is inscribed on their left shoulder blade; except for the commanders, they are refered to as "Sargent (commander name)." There is always a women commander for every tree region. Servants don't have names either they are just refered to as their occupation. (These apply to every tree region)
The two tree regions that were infested by the plague were Gurengia and Nythinia, so for characters there will be no one from those two regions. Each commander has a similar ability that matches the demi in their region. If a demi headmaster dies the demi is then transfered to another tree region with a demi in it. There is a school required in every region, for basic education of course.
Make sure you have read what this story is about so you can understand all of this, because if you haven't I suggest you do. The rankings are normal royal rankings of the victorian era, heiress and etc.
Also the 7 demi's:
-Illusion (Omeaga)
-Elemental Manifestation (Alpecka)
-Armory (Yuopia)
-Weathering (Etechia)
-Healing (Galeleo)
-Demi-weilder (Core)
-Animal/Spirits (Pronejio)
Illusion: You can create 5 minute believable and very realistic illusions of anything you choose, depending on your will.
Elemental Manifestation: You can manifest anything with the four elements, but it uses up energy if you use it too muc
Armoury: Basically Athena's abilities.
Weathering: You can create anything you want out of the weather, and your emotions will effect when you use it.
Healing: You can create anything to heal a person.
Demi-weilder: You can weild all 7 demis, but only one at a time.
Animal/Spirits: You can summon any animal/spirit for your purpose.
Core characters:
-Demitria (Core)
-Thylia (Core)
Commanders:
-Crystal (Alpecka)
-Penny (Omeago)
-Gretchen (Yuopia)
-Mary (Etechia)
-Hydie (Galeleo)
-Sarah (Pronejio)
Second in command:
-Gavon (Alpecka)
-Carl (Omeago)
-Tyler (Yuopia)
-Franklin (Etechia)
-Martin (Galeleo)
-Tio (Pronejio)
-Tritan (Alpecka)
-Jason (Omeago)
-Sysali (Yuopia)
-Gibson (Etechia)
-Pyrrah (Galeleo)
-Blake (Pronejio)
Main characters:
-Kunime
-Nessinis
-Caliston
-Nebula
-Cristaline
-Syrius
-Polly-ann
Hope you enjoy, bye!