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I do not usually fall into Systems novels so easily but I am shamelessly doing so now; this book is an exponential step above the rest! From our Male Lead, whose story is rooted in the seasons of life, to witty chapter titles, I have thoroughly enjoyed the progression of this story so far. Every stage of this story has been well executed. Each character feels unique. The author’s English expression is magnificent! Safe within my library, I’ll be waiting for updates to this book.

Nice book.
The dialogue is so natural and that's something we writers struggle to do especially for me 
Nice intro too
Your story development is all nice too

Writing Quality: Good and readable
Updating Stability: Superb and always updated!
Story Development: Nice pacing
Character Design: It's nice and clean
World Background: Had enough to engage more chapters.

Hello this is brandon gould this is my review of your book

The story was very interesting and well written, the world and charters are described will and i get a sense of what the rules of the universe are

That being said as i was reading i kept thinking besides the black hole Why does he need to fix the universe, where is the conflict will progress the story motioving the MC to action ?

A suggestion would be and you might be hinting at it, that the UVS is not what they seem to be and Master Isuh who i like and would want more devlompt from has a altertive motive 

but beside that it is a very interesting story and i hope you win the contest 

It seems to be a good story with wonderful dialogue. I think there needs to be some more description of the story and the characters. I look forward to seeing what comes next in this story. The formatting and grammar appears to be solid.

I'm invested to the MC. A good character, balanced and no, not only interesting, but also knows how to make you stay reading! I wish this was longer tho, Keep going, Author, keeping this in my collection!

Amazing story!! Just after reviewing, I'm going to save it in my collections so I can link myself with upcoming chapters. Best theme for teens.

The book is really great, the concept and Setting. Everything is well explained. I would really love to read more chapters of this book. Great work author! keep it up!

Hmmmm I must say I am very much impressed with what I have read so far, I could barely find faults in your story, however, I will suggest you research on how to write agreat synopsis to spike curiosity in your readers, asides from that I am loving it!!!❤️❤️😘I love your good use of grammar too

Great writing quality and concept. The cover page is really cool too (did you draw that yourself?), it drew me in. Definitely did not regret giving this a try, and I look forward to seeing more chapters.

Keep it up, author!

The Legendary Systems Engineer is a very good book in my opinion through the rather hard sci-fi premise(everything is explained through conventional science when possible) that is intermixed with litrpg elements.
It's an original take that I haven't seen much of on WN, and the writing quality is good and allows for smooth reading.
I haven't seen any glaring issues with the book personally and it was a pleasant, albeit short read so I'll be looking forward to the future releases.
Keep up the good work!

I would be interested in where it goes after Newton's laws of gravity are done. Its a giant system world while initially similar to the Matrix But isn't the Matrix. Good job. 

Now it is at the beginning but in the future, it will be fun to add Einstein's laws of relativity with Feyman's work in gravitational physics. Or perhaps even Hawking's Black Hole area theorem. 

The concept is really refreshing and unique! I love how you make the dialogues funny without forcing anything out of it! The MC has a mouth of a sailor! It always makes me laugh~ Kudos for the author!

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