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Chapter 12 - lancer vs saber with commentary

As they landed off the plane they went through the airports customs but as they did all three of them noticed something there was a white haired and red eyed woman with another woman dressed in an all black suit. The real problem wasn't the white haired woman but the one dressed in black. They didn't seem to notice there glares as they were already had a lot of attention on them with the growing crowd around them.

Yurei :" guys you don't have to worry about them just yet so let's go home we'll have a busy night tonight." they simultaneously nodded and followed  him.  (3 hours later : currently 10:45pm)

Yurei :" Bois have you got your snacks!"

Luffy and zoro :" yeah!"

Yurei :" alright let's head out now so we get front row seats!"

They ran towards lancers masters invatation making sure they were just behind iris and Saber (an: i'll use Saber because its shorter than Arthur)

As they walked into the battleground

They didn't even bother to hide their immense presence (of course with the exception of their conquerors haki and yes I'll be giving Yurei only conquerors haki) this lead for everyone to look at them even kiritsugu which led to Yurei to say

Yurei :" Oh why did you guys get shocked? don't mind us  just continue with you battle."

Zoro added on :" yeah hurry it up otherwise my alcohols going to get warm."

Iris then said" who are you  people the church only informed us of seven masters and seven heroic spirits. "

She said this with a bit of concern confusion and worry on her face

Yurei :" Well our real identitys are none of your business. But for as what  we are doing here I'm a master and these two are my friends but I guess the proper term in this case is to call them my servants."

This is when Saber inturrupted and said with pity in her voice :" is the grail so cruel to choose a mere child as a master. Take my advice young one and flee this a place for men and women to fight it will dangerous. "

This is when Yurei with his face showing an anger mark on it said

Yurei :"Watch your tone you old hag im more than qualified to be here than most. And please don't think the petty trick of having the eizberns hommonculi faking to be your master is fooling anyone so take my advice don't aggrivate me even more or you will not like the end result." he said as he released a stunning amount of killing intent to the point it froze maya and iris to the point iskandar could feel it.Zoro and luffy could help but Show a great big grin as they realised how much stronger he had grown since the last time he had fought zoro .And with no more delay the two knights proceeded to fight. As the fight was ongoing luffy couldn't help but shout

Luffy :" this lance wielder is weaker than katakuri. These fights are going to be boring."

Lancer hearing this couldn't help but be offended.

Zoro then said

Zoro:"that women swordsmen is about the same level as vista the flower swordsmen but that's not even enough to make me unsheath my third blade."

yurei: " Lancer its about time you stop flirting with the hag and whip your noble phantasm out "

Lancer :" I dont take orders from a child-"

lancer scarcley finished off his sentence before he hears a message from his master

melloi: " he may be our enemie but he's right this is far too long of a battle your knights pride means nothing to me but the grail and time do"

irishvel gets shocked hearing the lancers master voice

he then orders lancer to do what he asked

thats when Yurei speaks up in shock and in dissapointment

Yurei:" HOLD UP ! "

the whole battlefield came to a standstill

all eyes focused on him

Yurei : "ARE YOU SERIOUSLY TELLING ME YOU DIDNT KNOW WHERE LANCERS MASTER WAS POSITIONED ?!"

Irishvel looked away in shame

Yurei : " BAGAHAGAHAGAGAGA"

Zoro and luffy try their best but still let out some grins and giggles of amusement

Yurei then switches his tone and so do zoro and luffy

Yurei :" Irishvel von Einzbern."

irishvel looks at Yurei

Yurei :" Are you truly sabers master ? "

Irishvel keeping her composure responds without hesitation : Yes

Yurei :" thats a lie"

regrettably lancer brung out his second spear

then proceeds to slice sabers ribcage like he does in canon

irishvel starts healing saber but whilst she does that yurei sorus to her and uses his technique

Yurei : "Reapers contract"

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reapers contract =

imbeds as small as a 1/8 of yureis mana into his targets body but is only able to when their mana circuits open

it can be used to track their general location

re-structure their mana circuits

yet to have any voilent attribute added

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Irishvel coughs blood and drops to her knees

saber catches a glimpse of this and goes to charge at yurei with killing intent but then zoro appears infront of her releasing a little bit of his fighting spirit mixed with his killing intent

saber : " Move you barbarian!"

zoro : " Oh are those fighting words missy BECAUSE IVE BEEN ITCHING FOR ONE AFTER THIS SORRY DISPLAY"

Saber about to attempt to strike zoro down

but was stopped by irishvels shout

irishvel : " SABER! Listen its not a bad injury just minor internal bleeding and it doesnt seem like this boy is going to attack me anymore "

Saber : " BUT!-"

Irishvel glares with reassurance at her

Saber : " Understood.' she begrudgingly resumes her fight with lancer

zoro of course wasnt going to let this happen and was going to remove his wado ichimonji from its sheath

then yurei with a gleeful face and cheerful attitude says to zoro

yurei : " Its not time as tempting as it is plus you shouldn't use such a graceful blade on her as she is now , there will be a time where ill let you fight with no repercussions and with the best conditions"

zoro :" is booze apart of it? "

Yurei :" HOW ABOUT AS MUCH AS THERE IS SEA IN THE EAST BLUE!"

Zoro :"Yurei if this is true , can i take you back to the ship???"

yurei:" No ill only meet you again when your the worlds greatest swordsman !"

zoro's Face lights up with a huge grin and chuckles and brings yurei back to the seating area where luffy was sitting with his mouth stuffed with all the snacks they brung

Yurei :" zoro remind me to next time to go to a buffet before we go to any battles..." he chuckled with sweat droplets slowly coming down his mask

on the battlefield

lancer had just immobilised sabers wrist like in canon

but then yurei decides to make himself intangible but not invisible and completely makes his presence hidden by sectioning off the mana in a one metre raduis near him

yurei thinks ' since they arent familiar with my mana signature ill take this opportunity to take a chance for an experiment of mine'

he soru'd once more to the battlefield and whilst lancers gaurd was down grabbed lancers shorter gold spear and tryed using it but of course lancers not going to let him wield his sacred weapon and tries to strike him and grab it multiple times

***think of killua and gon trying to grab the ball from netero***

yurei:" HEY LANCER THIS SPEAR! WHY DOES IT HAVE A SPIRIT OR LIKE A WILL OF ITS OWN FIGHTING AGAINST ME ?!"

Lancer :" How about you find out second hand by dying by its blade"

Yurei scoffs but then their exchange of words was cut short by zoro

Zoro :" a will of it own hey? sounds odly familiar like enma . Hey. HEY BRAT PASS ME THAT SPEAR"

Yurei does so as soon as he heard zoro finish his sentence

zoro grips it but the spear starts reacting violently and starts burning zoro's hand to get out his control

zoro's Grin Widens to his ears

so zoro uses his a bit of haki to try get the spear to submit its control to him but just before it complied lancer stopped his noble phantasm and fled with his master but before he left

Lancer : " MY SPEAR WILL LEAVE THIS GRAIL WAR WITH THE NEW HUMAN PIN CUSIONS!"

Luffy was the first to start laughing but then glared at lancer and spoke calmly but menacingly

luffy :" Oh to threaten the man who is to become pirate king"

Yurei : " stupid move , but cmon guys its past my bedtime i need to go to bed lets go"

he says pouting

luffy and zoro giggle at his concern and join him

Yurei then sections of the mana in a 3 mile radius of them and they all conceal their presences and soru away.