Hey guys, the next five chapters are coming up soon! I just wanted to address a few issues I've seen with my story before embarking down the wrong path.
1. The system is too convoluted:
I haven't defined the system very well, but sharing my base idea will spoil the story a bit. First, I think my whole estimation system is a bit bunk...I want to show the results of the stats through my writing rather than just put it on your screen. What's more, I don't feel like I've shown what the system can do very well. I'll list the available functions for now.
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Inventory
Skills
Status Screen
Quests + Quest Draw
Acknowledgement and Titles
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I'll try and do a better job at showing these functions as the story goes on. I will continue to try and improve my writing skills as the chapters progress. Thank you for spending your time reading the beginning of this story of mine. The next chapters will start being released about an hour or two from now! See you guys then!