Shiggy_requiem

This story revolves around fourth wall breaking, dimension hopping, and dungeon clearing. The protagonist Griffin Yeager has to protect Earth 131 from anything that decides to appear through a gate, that is his sworn duty as a GateKeeper.

United States

Great start to an interesting story. I’m intrigued to know more about Griffin and how time revolves around the story. Strong dialogue and descriptive fight scene, I’m ready for the next chapter.

Great start! So far, so good. Like the background and character development so far. Intriguing premise. Looking forward to what comes next in the story. 

Very sharp writing with vivid imagery. So far the characters are well formed with distinctive voices. Looking forward to see how the overall story develops. 

I found myself deeply intrenched in this world very quickly, and finally characters with depth and original, also compelling points of view. This is superior on every level.  

LOVE IT!! This is not your average hero story, the main character “Griffith” breaks the fourth wall, in which shows their goofy and relatable “average” guy personality. Though, his life is Far from “average”.

I love that it started off with dialogue, it capitaved my attention right away. I can't wait for more chapters to come out, so I can learn more about Griffin and any more upcoming characters.