MrJabra

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Reincarnated                                                                                                                         
Get system                                                                                                                             
Fall in love with a childhood female friend                                                                          
Separates from childhood friend cause she's talented(very original)                                 
Bruh she fell in love with someone else                                                                               
Get's cucked (lol)                                                                                                                          
Cries

Well after reading I'd say it's good, but surely other readers would say that you get titles and skills with ease or by comparing it to the "mind or player, as they call it xD" system.
- It has errors that are not very noticeable (since I have read others, where you have to think to make sense of a paragraph).
- The way one paragraph follows another, the use of ", among other ways to give more emphasis to important moments.
- and between other things.
- and finally (it would be great if the protagonist adds a girl from the demon side, maybe a princess or that the demon king is a girl, you know where on the path of the fight he meets the hero and the former friend (although as always in all novels they are bubble gum, where the supposed hero is more "evil" and only does his act of kindness and has all that note of fame and girls that are trusted), it would be great that when they go to attack the demon king in  the protagonist goes through them and gives him his madraso and for the final blow he reveals to his "ex-friend" his identity, it would be great to see his astonished face and also see the true personality of said hero, or whatever type .XD).
- If you have no more ideas, you can make it go to other worlds, leaving the current one in a frozen state.
- I only knew about this novel because you wrote about "Boku no hero academia".
- It is difficult for your novel to have people, since they are always looking for something flashy, or to have full r18 scenes or something like that (like gore, intelligent protagonist, not so lustful, with development, something romance of brothers or with mother stepmother, you know what I mean).

was pretty good till it progressively got worse sadly also I stoped at one of the chapters so I don't know if it gets better so all in all if you think it's good then have a try at it

Great book update soon pleeaasseeeeeeeeeeeeee[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow       
                                                                              
                     

It's an Isekai and it's good.


Although it's in it's early stage, but I'm hoping for something good.



Keep it up,,, 





waiting for next chapter 💜

Here I'm sucking my own D
How shameless of me giving myself 5 stars 😊 he he he....
Ore wa kuzo desu.......
Kuzo
Kuzo 
Kuzo
Kuzo!!!
Kuzo.........jaykfldlhfldyldfjfllydhfsititruaiddykssklufkyzlufludlifeullu

Got a great system! Narcissist on the way.