yeah this story just aint working out. It jumps into things to fast, its word as hell and i mean weird as HELL so im just scrapping it i wont delete it bc i want to reflect on it as my first time ever becoming an author and writing something for other to see. SO that said and done im leaving this be forever and if you want me to create something else that i'll work even harder on and make sure im not just jumping into things like this then just comment and i'll do it simple as that.
Editor out.