Bobbydale_Murr

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There Is only one chapter that will state why.

For all those who stuck by and read, Thank you. 

Have a good day.

i will be posting them on amazon. if i find me on Facebook i will answer more

So i shouldve clarified this. They are not ready for publishing. tho i am getting them ready what i mean to say they will be there in the future. preferably before summer of this coming year. the cover is finished, but its the conversion to the correct files for uploading that has been quite the delayer. dont worry. its coming, im tryin to get it all goin.

whats the name of your books on amazon ive tried to find you but cant

<p>I am stripping all content with the exception of the lich system off this platform. There are reasons ireally cannot get into for my own safety.That aside. Prism collective book is gettin its first book completed. You'll likely see this soon, i am thankful to all of you folks. But its time i end my authorship on webnovel</p>

This is doc with an alt, wanted to get the story to 10 review so the stars show up. I was probably a little harsh with my 3 stars for this novel, it is far better than most any novels on this site. The problems aren't anything that cause alot of suffering to the story, and I had to do alot of math which a casual reader wouldn't do so any issues would go over their heads.


Good, gives you an interesting story of a race whose whole hope is one 1 being (MC). There are 4 races in the universe: Humans, Space Elves, Void borne, And The Machines (whose name I don't remember) who the MC is a part of. The story is good. Has multiple POVs that give the flavor. Only this I hope were better is the Stability of updates. 

Yet another alt since my other one was limited to only 1 review, I hope this isn't against webnovel TOS to use alts to support a novel, gonna keep my 3 star up to offset these 5 stars a bit.

Updated review: The story is quite unique and the scale is incredible, I'll give this novel that. The major problems I have with the novel is lack of description. It just says things happen with no good justification, there are barely any units or measurements, and if your lucky barely comprehensible analogies. 
If it takes using dogs running an unstandard measuring unit and comparing it to regular humans and now to the super soldiers, why bother, just say he can now travel at 200mph with some flair  instead of this horribly unnecessary method.
Then comes the world's internal logic. With the later chapters around 60-72 you may see some of my paragraph comments that go into far, far more detail.

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It starts good, but then it goes slowly towards "weird". The main issues are the parts where readers are directly addressed or societies get introduced only to then not be used for a long while. Would be better to only introduce them when they will appear more. Also maybe update the description of the story or tags. The story slowly develops in a direction that is no longer expected from it.

nice story, and I love sci-fi[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Good kingdom building and Army building  novel..............................................................................................

One of my favorite novels on the site, it's a shame that it isn't updated often. The MC is an AI, he has no sense of morality towards humans, he simply wants to revitalize the machine empire. If you want to read a sci-fi story, with the POV from a skynet-like machine MC then this is the novel for you.

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This is actually a nice departure from normal sci-fi. It feels like it jumps around but it's all tied together. Keep it up author. I'm greatly looking forward to how this develops.

really good novel definitely one of the better space/kingdombuilding themed books I have seen so far

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Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Update, Do Not Be Alarmed