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safar (hindi story)

Dharmesh_2000
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do ajnabee ki jab train me mulaqaat hoti hai toh woh ek aise safar pe nikalte hai jo.....

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Chapter 1 - HINDI KAHANI

[Characters:-

Karan (age:22)

Divya (age;20)

Mahesh uncle (age:37)

(From karan's perspective)

 chapter one:-INTEZAAR

ghadi me kareeb 4:25 bajhne aayethe me railway station par baithkar track par ghoom rahe rats ko dekh raha tha,meri train 5 bajhe aane waali thi lekin me 1 ghanta pehle aagaya tha mujhe ab bas 30 minutes tak time pass karna the me mobile me bhi time pass kar sakta tha lekin me aisa nahi karna chahta tha mere aas paas bohot log the,ek uncle aur aunty bahash kar rahe the ki uska ladka unko lene aayega ya nahi,ek bacha apni maa se creame waale biscuit lene ki zidd kar raha tha tabhi waha paani bechne waala aaya toh mene socha ki kyu na iske saath hi time pass karlu

me:-bhaiya suno

paani waala:-haa bhaiya kitne du 

me:-nahi mujhe paani nahi chahiye me bas yeh puchna chahta tha ki aap roj kitna kama lete h

paani waala:-kya bhaiya aap bhi majak kar diye mera 

                    pata nahi kyu par woh paani waala apna box utarkar mere paas aakar beth gaya "ab kya kare bhaiya aur kahi kaam bhi nahi milta aur ghar par biwi aur bacho ko khush bhi rakhna hai bacho ka padhai ka kharcha bhi nikaalna hai paani bech kar kabhi kharcha nikalta hai kabhi nahi nikalta lekin chalta hai zindagi hai'' aisa bol kar woh chala gaya aur me soch me duba raha aur woh paani bechte bechte chala gaya 

                  20 minutes ho gaye the mujhko train ki awaaj sunai de rahi thi jo log idhar udhar ghoom rahe the sab ek jagah khade ho gaye train ki awaaj meri dhadkano ke saath badh rahi hi kyu ki mujhe akshar safar karne me nervousness hoti thi pata nahi kyun par hoti th  

              train ab platform par aagyayi thi anounement bhi hone lagi thi trai dheere dheere karke rukk gayi sab log train me chadhne lage lekin me shaant tha mujhe koi dhakka mukki nahi chahiye thi jab sab chadh-utar gaye tab me apna saaman lekar  train ke andar jaane ke liye gaya aur train bhi chalu hogayi me jaldi se train me chadha aur  meri dhadkan normal hogayi me khaali seat dhundne ke liye nikla lekin 3rd class me kaha aasaani se seat milti hai me aage badhta gaya aur seat ko dekhta gaya lekin sab jagah log baithe huye the kuch log family ke saath kuch kha rahe the to koi aaram se so rahe the,mujhe ek seat dikhi toh me fatafat waha jaake baith gaya mene dhyaan bhi nahi diya ki waha ek khoobsurat ladki baithi hai

(Third person perspective)

Chapter two:-MULAQAAT

             Karan window ke paas  baitha aur uska  saaman side me rakhkar comfortable hua 

                 ''Kamaal hai puri train me kahi bhi jagah khaali nahi hai lekin yaha toh puri seat khaali hai"woh khud se bolta hai divya me uski aur dekha ''kya'' woh boli ''mujhse kuch kaha kya''

''Nahi nahi'' karan ne jawaab dete huye bola '' me to khudse bola''

Divya ne pucha ''kya bole'' karan ne kha ki

''Woh puri train me kahi bhi bethne ke liye jagah nahi hai lekin yaha toh puri seat khaali hai''

''Tum puri train me ghoom chuke ho?'' Divya ne pucha ''nahi nahi mera matlab is dibbe me'' karan ne jawab diya divya ne muskurakar kaha "oh"

"waise aap kaha ja rahe ho" karan ne pucha divya ne jawab diya "kunjanpur" rahul ne chonkkar kaha " kya baat kar rahe ho me bhi wahi ja raha hoon" "bohot door hai na divya boli rahaul ne jawaab diya "haa door to bohot hai lekin hum is sunder nazare ko dekhne me aise kh jaayenge ki humko andaaja bhi  nhi lagega ki kab kunjanpur aagaya" 

                       kareeb 6 bajh rahe they karan aur divya window se khule farms par laal suraj ki roshni pad rahi thi woh nazara dekh rahe the birds waapis apne ghar ko ja rahe the thandi hawa ki lahre dono ke chehre ko touch kar rahi thi aur baalo ko uda rahi thi 

                   Andhera ho gaya tha train rudramudra naam ke station par aagayi thi ''train abhi 30-40 minutes ke liye rukegi toh kyu na station par kuch kha kar aut thoda ghoom kar aaye'' karan ne kaha

      ''Chalo mujhe bhi bhukh lagne lagi hai'' divya ne kaha

    Dono train se utar kar platform par aate hai

''60 saal purana railway station" karan kehta hai

''Kya'' divya puchti hai

      ''Yeh railway station 60 saal purana hai mene iske baare me ek paper me padha tha is railway station ko banane ke liye bohot saare loge ne mehnat ki thi aandolan kiya tha tab jaake yeh bana'' karan ne jawab diya

     ''Acha'' divya kehti hai ''chalo pehle kuch khaate hai''

     Station par charo taraf yellow bulb ki roshni thi kuch gine chune log idhar udhar ghoom rahe the jyadatar log track ke paas hi khade the. Dono food stall ke paas gaye ''kya khaye''

                 ''Kuch bhi'' divya ne kaha ''pulao''

''Theek hai'' 

      ''Railway station par khana hamesha acha lagta hai kyu ki aap usko banta hua nahi dekhte'' karan ne kaha divya ne jawab nahi diya shayad woh yeh sochkar apne khaane ka mood karab nahi karna chahti thi.dono ek bench par beth gaye aur pulao ki dish unwrap karke usme se spoon nikaal kar pulao khane lage.pulao garam tha aur spoon plastic ki 

         ''Waise tum kaha rehti ho''

         ''Waillar'' divya ne kaha.waillar ek mini city hai jo ki kunjanpur se bohot door hai.waillar ki hariyaali har jagah famous hai waha ke ghar ek jaise hi dikhte hai aur raaste trees se cover winter me jaise aap kisi alag hi duniya me aagaye ho kyu ki aap suraj ki peeli roshni dekh to sakte ho lekin mehsoon nahi kar sakte aur jab woh peeli roshni trees se hokar jameen par gire toh woh najara hi alag hota hai aur upar se population bhi kam jisse aap cycle se pura mini city aasani se ghoom sakte ho bina koi pareshani ke

        ''Waillar? Woh toh bahot door hai'' ''Ha'' divya ne kaha ''door to bohot hai''

                        ''Toh itni door aane me koi pareshaani nahi hui'' karan ne  pucha

        ''Meri life me bohot si pareshaani hai iske saamne woh kuch nahi hai'' divya ne jawab diya

        ''Me jaan sakta hoon woh problems ke baare me'' karan ne kaha

         ''Kyu nahi me to bas aise logo ko dhundti rehti hoon jo meri problems sune'' divya ne soft voice me kaha ''is duniya me boho se log dukhi hai koi kaam se pareshaan hai koi is duniya se pareshaan hai lekin jab woh ghar par jaate hai woh sab dukh bhool jaate hai lekin jo log ghar ki problems se  dukhi rehte hai unko sambhalne waala akshar hi koi hota hai me bhi usi category me se hoon.mere parents har waqt jaghad te rehte the har baat pe jaghad te rehte the is wajah se mere dad alcoholic ho gaye aur meri mom depressive phir woh pehle se bhi jyada jaghad ne lage un dono ke bech mai phas gayi aur maayush rehne lagi aur mera dimaag kharab hone laga lekin me apna dimag aur kharab nahi karna chahti thi isliye mene socha ki ab se koi tension nahi lungi aur befikar hogar rahungi isliye me yaha tumhare saath beth kar pulao kha rahi hoon''

         ''Isliye me sochu ki tum ajeeb i mean itni alag kyu ho jo kisi stranger se itni talkative ho aur stranger ke saath pulav khaane ke liye agree ho gayi

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               ''Ajeeb?'' divya kehti hai ''agar me kisi stranger ke saath baat karu aur thoda ghum phir lu to me ajeeb''

            ''Nahi aisa nahi hai'' karan kehta hai ''matlab toh kuch aisa hi hai lekin waisa nahi hai what ever let it be'' 

           ''Tum karte kya ho?'' Divya kehti hai

           ''Padhai'' karan ne kaha

          ''Aur abhi kaha se aarahe ho''

          ''Tinmaar se'' karan ne kaha ''mere uncle ke waha rehte hai'' 

            ''Aur tumhari hoby kya hai'' divya ne kaha 

             ''Aise random questions kyu puch rahi ho'' karan ne kaha 

              ''Kya karu dimaag me jo aaraha hai puch rahi hoon'' divya ne kaha

            ''Kya hobby hona matter karta hai?'' Karan ne kaha

             ''Ha sabki koi na koi hobby ho ti hi hai'' divya ne kaha

           ''Lekin agar kisi ki koi bhi hobby na ho to kya woh normal nahi hai'' karan ne kaha 

          ''Lekin aaise kaise ho sakta hai sab ki koi na koi hobby hoti hi hai na'' divya ne kaha 

             ''Toh tum ab debate start karna chahti ho'' karan ne kaha 

             ''Ha, agar tum agree ho toh''divya ne kaha

Karan thode time ke liye kuch nahi bola woh idhar udhar dekhne laga, thode silence ke baad woh bola

          ''Yeh station kitna beautiful hai na'' 

       ''Waah topic change ''divya ne kaha 

Karan ke face par smile aagayi woh ab kya bole usko samajh nahi aaraha tha 

          ''Shayad mai tumse jeet nahi sakts isliye''karan ne kaha 

          ''Tumne try hi nahi ki''divya ne kaha

         ''Kya matlab try nahi kiya''

         ''Yahi ki tumne try hi nahi ki mujhse jitne ki,ab tum hi batao kya koi bina try kiye jeet sakta hai'' divya ne kaha

         ''Yeh baat sahi hai'' karan ne kaha

   Divya ne deep breathe li aur kkaha

''Meri har baat sahi hoti hai''

            ''Ab yeh galat baat hai'' karan ne kaha ''aisa lagta hai ki hum humesha sahi hote hai lekin aisa nahi hota'' 

             ''Iska matlab yeh ki jo abhi tumne bola woh galat bhi ho sakta hai'' divya ne kaha

            ''Haa to me yeh keh raha tha ki yeh station kitna beautiful hai aur upar se yeh yellow lights isko aur beautiful banati hai'' karan ne kaha ''aur ha please ab yeh mat kehna ki mene topic change kar diya'' 

             ''Okay okay'' divya ne kaha ''nahi kahungi lekin last bar yeh bata do ki  agar koi insaan sahi ho aur saamne waala uske dimaag me yeh daal de ki woh galat hai aur woh insaan yeh maan bhi le ki woh galat hai toh isme galat kon hai'' 

       Yeh sawaal karan ko samajh me bhi nahi aaaya aur agar aabhi gaya hota to woh jawaab nahi de paata  

           ''Mujh par thodi daya khao'' karan ne kaha '' pulao to hum kha hi rahe hai''

           ''Theek hai theek hai'' divya ne kaha

           ''Aur ha,kabse mere baare me hi puch rahe ho kuch apne baare me bhi batao''karan ne kaha

          ''Kya batau'' 

          ''Kuch bhi'' karan ne kaha ''tumko kya pasand hai, tum kya karna chahti ho, tum kya kya sochti ho yeh sab''

       ''Ummmm mera sochna yeh hai ki is duniya me jitne bhi religion hai un sab ke name par ek desh hone chaiye aur sabhi alag alag log apne alag alag desh me rehne chahiye''

               ''Kafi khatarnak soch hai tumhari'' karan ne kaha ''yeh batao ki tumko pasand kya hai''

          ''Waise to mujhko movie dekhna,stories padhna,music sunna pasand hai lekin kabhi me yeh sochti hoon ki world tour karu, kahi nature me ghoomne jau, raat ko stars ko dekhu aur bas dekhti rahu lekin 30 minutes me bore ho jaati hoon aur meri life ka motto hai healthy,wealthy and tasty''

         ''Good''karan kehta hai''me bhi tumhare is motto se kuch sikh lunga