abd_pd

China

Big sad...
(Sorry if any of this sounds rude)
The story wasn't that bad, in my opinion.
The only problem I saw was you setting unrealistic goals (12 days of tankmas).

It might have helped if you didn't try to force yourself to write, take it slow until you get used to writing the story. Then set a schedule and slowly increase the chapter size.

It's like exercise, when you start you won't be able to keep a consistent schedule and do it for 2 hours each session. You would have to slowly get into it maybe doing 20 minutes of exercise every 7 days, yhen when yoh feel comfortable increase the amount of exercise you do.

(exercise=word count, schedule=amount of days before you ulload a chapter)

I hope this helps if you write a new story.

I know my updating times are rather awful and not consistant i was unable to get 8 of the twelve chapters out on time due to events that happened and a wifi outage where i was on vacation which prevented me from getting chapters out.


with this i realize that i am not a good author because i cant get chapters out on time like i say this


also ties into writers block specificly on the point that is very hard as i now know to write a story with the mc as a tank or vehicle because the restrictions that apply and the base power of tanks


they have very strong guns that are meant to take out oposing armor


and when used against living things they kind of well turn into a cloud of bloody mist i have tried doing things to fix this issue so this is where it becomes hard to balance and write the mc 


since the mc is well a tank that means anything i throw at the mc in the story currently is well useless and cant do anything 


this is resolved in phase two but there are other things like the fact i did have a plan for the story's entire plot but filling it out posed problems like interactions are akward and feel forced and i couldnt write them in a natural way thus why i put the faction perk to help with that but that was a temporary solution and i just could not find a way to fix this.


and my massive screw up with how i started and another issue


but of how i screwed up it was how i introduced the power the mc has with him getting a ww2 tank which has a gun that can kill modern tanks like abrams t72 and well almost every tank out there so if i have a enemy that can ressist this kind of damage it either works or fails very badly


HE shells do damage regardless because shell will go boom as soon as it touchs somthing but to balance that out well its not possible since i went with mostly reality but with some game elements so i cant balance out damage because it would be a paradox the book i built has a flawed foundation so i am sorry that you all waited and used your power stones on this book


the chapters will also be removed in a while


I never ever knew that u needed a Web novel like this so bad until I read this today its the best thing u have read so far it's like an itch that I didn't know haunted me has finally been scratched

nice book overall can't wait for more especially those experimental tanks I can't wait till a rail gun tank comes out kinda like the one in gta 5 if that's possible other than that keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=update]

The russian death fridge pleases me. Also we need moar chapters since this is quite good. Apart from that I have no real complaints about the story at all.

this is an awesome I hope you will continue writing this it's very well written very detailed and enjoyable so please continue writing this[img=recommend][img=update]

tonk tonk tonk tonk tonk tonk tonk tonk tonk tonk tonk tonk tonk tonk tonk p.1000 RATTE banana tonk goo weeeeeee how is big tonk? and why is a tank kidnapping my house where is the promised new story 
why are bananas flying?

I thought I have seen it all, but that blew my mind...

Good idea, now let's see how good it is executed.
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tank>Harem i huge fannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnlove

good tonk story  updating stability sucks 
I'm a little generous  the zombie apocalypse ting is creative but it some how doesn't feel original idk why not but ok currently at 5.1.2022 1:00 
the newest chapter is 19 days a go
plot is a little weird some times like the reaction off the crew 
but to be honest I love this story

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