Lord_Banned

NO HAREM GANG also the author is clearly new at writing but the sentences are concise and sharp, capitalization could be better and spacing between paragraphs can help, this comes with time and experience. Overall, The story has potential and if developed correctly could be very good.

Good story and a Non-harem at that it gets 5 Stars although I wish you make the Chapters longer ....................................................................

I love everything about this book please continue till the end😊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😊😊👍👍👍👍😊😊👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😚😚😘😍☺☺☺☺☺😜

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I like it so far, it has good potential, hope it doesn't get dropped ............................................................................

Best
5★★★★★
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whos love intrest if oc i arent reading.....................................................................................................................

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