Amitabha_Vardha

Her gaze was numbing, love? Embarrassment?
What is this? Why do her eyes fill me with so much.... what?

Ascension Island

This was....wow. Man, you are one awesome writer. This was perfect

Well I certainly enjoyed reading that! Despite the length of the chapter, it was a rather engaging read! the quality is outstanding and surpasses wn novels! the story is dark and twisty but that's the spice that makes is nice! it kept me interested and anticipating each next move! overall the author has Written this quite well and deserves more attention

This is the kind of writing I love. This was superb thus far. I hope the writer continues it. This is some deep and beautiful writing. If you love romance and mental disorders I would say? And maybe all that with a twist of dark theme and fantasy, then you would love this novel. There is not really much fantasy but trust me, this story is epic. Hats off to the author.

If I must say am really impressed, the first thought that came into my mind was dam this chapter is too long. But so far so good, it legit through and through especially Alex and Cordelia unique relationship.

When I saw that the book had only one chapter, I thought perhaps that chapter is very long. To be honest, I never expected that I would end up giving a five star review for it. I love horror. I'm a blood and gore fanatic so it makes perfect sense for me to enjoy your book.

Other things included the fact that the story is so thrilling. I was scrolling so fast so I could find out what happened next. Story development, perfect ten. 

Not much character development since this is a short story. The world background was properly executed. Frankly, I don't even have anything to critique except for the fact that some parts need to be edited properly.

Some words were omitted in crucial parts. I noticed that twice. With proper editing, I have to say that this work is golden.

A true horrific piece of art✨

xxxxzpop

Table of contents

Volume 1

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