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Its good at first. but paragraphs is too long and needs to be cut

Interesting but there was a lot of infodump and telling instead of showing, I also had a hard time with these things but through practice and constant updates I believe the author can overcome these in due time ';>

I must say the first paragraph got me, the story building is amazing! There wasn't much errors that I noticed, but I love the work! Keep it up<33 I'm glad I didn't regret exchanging novels with u. 
-Danny. 

this book starts with a good world building, but paragraphs are too long on the 1st chapter, it has an interesting twist in the second chapter and i can't wait for more!

The writing quality and world building are tough-notch. There is nothing I can complain about there. The update stability is something I comment on at this stage, but what attracts me the most right now is the world and the concept. I honestly wish this kind of stories go to the top because I am tired of reading stories with overlapping ideas.

It is interesting and there's a suspense on the very start. The creation/building of the world was also unique and was a little akin to the happenings now. Great job author for building something amazing! Keep it up!

THIS IS AWESOME! I want a waifu that can and will cook for me. And after reading this, I got what I wanted. Kudos to the author for making this story possible!
♥️♥️♥️

There's not much of a chapter but I can feel the upcoming adventure that this book would offer. I hope to see this book completed. I added this novel to follow the progress of Mori and friends... looking forward for more updates!

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Writing Quality: ☑ 
Story Development: ☑ 
Character Design: ☑ 
Updating Stability: ☑ 
World Background: ☑

I didn’t find much grammatical errors and everything was developing well. I think there is only two issues. One is personal and one is not. For the non-personal one, I felt that it was hard for me to put a modern high school world with a fantasy world. However, I think I’ll become more used to it when there are more chapters. As for the personal issue, THERE’S ALREADY SAD NEWS ON CHAPTER 1. What is this tragedy? 😭 Spare my poor old heart. Otherwise, this is a really good novel and the FL seems like a really well thought out character. She’s quite mature and calm minded. 😊

Hai Hai. It's me Author-Sama.
Watashi English Bad.
Meh trying to improve so pwease forgive meh if write bad English.
And Also pwease read my story as Meh will try Meh's Hardest to write Good Story! Thanku!

I'm so excited for the future of this story. I'm a huge fan of cooking and action magical heroines so this story is a diamond to me. The pacing and description of the plot and the characters are amazing and I love the touch of mystery you put in. I am rooting for you dear author, great luck to you in the future.

cooked

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - ekwkw