NoviceMabi

Arcanes, blessed by the heavens, these people wield immense power able to influence the world of Tristram itself.
But what happens when this power gets into the wrong hands? 
And what about those without this power? What would they do to get it?

Hi, I won't be publishing for a while, I mainly just started publishing to get feedback and now that I've gotten it, I'm going to work on a full rewrite for the story with the same ideas, thanks for all the support!  


For the 5th chapter you could easily see that the setting and atmosphere created by the background made the chapter much better to read then the rest, not only that but there was great suspense and mystery in his ability and adding on how it was at the end so it would create a cliff hanger. In conclusion I believe that the chapter was one of the best so far (haven't read the 6th one yet) mostly because of the mystery on what his ability could be, mean or what it could symbolize for future events

So far, the fantasy aspect of the story is shown by the main character, Aschere, for example, his unique eyes. But also, how his 'kind' is treatly unfairly and is wanted by the King but also he was abandoned by his parents as he was seen as nothing but a 'burden.' I'd love to see how his character develops as he's mysterious thus far considering his eyes have yet to be explained but I'm sure the reason and adventures we will see will be interesting!

-REAL detective kyo (ノ*°▽°*)

Power:immeasurable

Table of contents

Volume 1 :The Young Arcane

Chapter 1 - A message to the reader