The_Novel_Man

Pakistan

Nice start but I advice that you work on your grammar as it is a very important factor with readers

Description also needs a bit of work but nonetheless a rather captivating read


Also, my condolences to you over the loss of your friend.

you should. though may I ask how you changed your books cover? I'm trying to figure it out hehe

I don't usually review, but this novel had me compelled to do this. 
So far, the it has been a captivating read and it managed to keep me hooked. 

There is no major Grammer mistakes and till date, Author has never updated an Unedited chapter, which shows how well planned the story is & that Author is serious about it. 
The world building is quite descriptive, in a slowly unfolding way. It doesn't just make up things. 

Now, about character development, it is quite clear that the Author is also improving as the story progresses. All the Power rankings and calculations are logically followed. 
Another thing is that, In Taming novels, starting us great but gradually it becomes trash. But, in here author has maintained the Consistency of everything. 

So, all in all, I'm looking forward to how the story progresses. Kudos to you Author!

Posted by the editor, ErwinCloude.

Hello everyone.

I'd like to clarify some things as I've read a comment on chapter 1 in regards to a lack of logic and how some things don't make sense.

Firstly, this novel is created mainly from the author's, Novel Man, imagination and some input from myself here and there, meaning he will write things that he obviously likes and think people will enjoy in this novel. So don't expect everything to be completely logical or for everything to reflect reality. It's a fantasy novel after all, what's the point of reading fantasy if everything is exactly the same as in real life? Thus, we will make some things fantastical or different from what you'd normally expect. 

Secondly, I feel like a distinction needs to be made between two types of logic, Universal Logic and Book Lore Logic. Mind you, these are terms I just thought up, so don't take them too seriously lol.

Universal Logic is, as the name implies, universal. Meaning it's unchanging and is naturally apparent to anyone reading a book. For example, as a certain someone once said, people die when they are killed :D or being caught lying is bad. These are natural things we've all seen or experienced ourselves enough, to know them to be true. So, they remain true in a fictional world as well..... in most cases lol.

Whereas Book Logic, is completely based upon the author's imagination, meaning it all relies upon the rules and laws decided by the creator of a fictional world. For instance, tamers holding a small world inside their dwelling which gives them cosmic powers.

So, when something strange happens, don't immediately assume it's bad, a plot hole or a slip up by the author. It can often times be based on the book's internal logic. The rules that enforce it are often made obvious in the beginning parts of a book, so a reader should judge the happenings of the story by those rules, assuming there's been enough time to set them all up. Sometimes, some of these rules are made purposefully vague with some hints here and there, for the purpose of cultivating a sense of mystery and intrigue for the reader. In which case, we hope the readers will be patient :D.

Although, obviously this book has only begun, so we hope the readers can be patient for now until most of the core rules are revealed as even we're only at the beginning of the story. Additionally, as we're new to this, we'll naturally make some mistakes here and there in the beginning, so we ask for readers to be understanding.

With all of that said, we hope you'll enjoy the journey of Akash and his friends. Please be kind in the comments and if you have any constructive criticism, express it in a clam and clear manner, so we can address it and learn from it. Thank you all for reading this :D.

If you like this novel, don't forget to comment your thoughts, vote with those precious power stones and leave a review :).

If need be, you can also contact us on discord, link provided in the synopsis.

If you love MC with Treasures and with loyal subordinates and kingdom building the this novel is for you.I like the mood of the story and it's progress is not fast nor slow just smooth and fine.The way the situation portrayed is great even the dynamic actions are detailed that you will imagine the scene to your head.Overall this is one of my favorite type of novel,great work author. Looking forward for the upcoming chapters.^_^

it's  a very  good  novel..it has  a good  start  and  the story  is  very interesting  ( everyone must give a try)..⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥

I recommend everyone to read this novel, it has something new which is missing in other system based novelS anD i will not spoil that thinNg. check it out For yourself and keep it Up author 
5 stars from me⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

the novel is really  good  and  the  writing  is good...this  novel  is  worth  a try  i recommend  to anyone .and I assure  they  won't  be disappointed 💥💥💥💥💥

I have read this novel when its was in his starting chapter and the story and world development was very good but because of low chater update i drop this novel but now it has more than 💯 chapter so iam back.

It was confusing initially, but as the characters grow, we get to know more about the world. Great story! Definitely recommend it to anyone who likes kingdom building.


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Hello! I haven't finished reading this book yet so I can't really say anything about how good it is but as for now I'm really liking this idea hope you don't drop this

This story has an amazing concept but then this is hampered by the few grammatical errors which makes the reading experience a hassle.

Character description also needs a bit of work

Apart from that, I feel this novel has potential and would love to see just how far it can go

wooow another  good  1    😋😋😋😋😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩😍😍🤩😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

so far  so good 🔥💥🔥💥🔥💥🔥🔥💥💥🔥💥💥🔥🔥💥🔥🔥💥🔥💥💥🔥💥💥🔥🔥💥💥🔥💥💥💥🔥🔥💥💥💥💥🔥🔥💥💥🔥🔥💥💥💥🔥🔥🔥💥💥💥💥💥🔥🔥💥🔥🔥💥💥🔥🔥🔥💥

When is this break going to be over. I’v been waiting for months now🤷‍♂️

excellent book  appreciate the expérience thank.... the mc is ok .i'm in chapter 42.........…................................................

The only mistake of this work was not to continue............................................... Uma das melhores obras que já li ou conheci, pelo fato de ser quase exatamente a historia que eu sinto vontade de escrever, mas ainda tenho esperança de que algum dia continue.(PORTUGUESE)

Tbh I love how unique the story is, about the cosmoses, characters and so on. But the pacing is to fast. The introduction chapters were quite good but not the chapters after that, 

This is a review for the first 10 chapters: keep in this mind. Overall, I don't have many complaints rather than some descriptions here and there could use some work. Pretty great for an reincarnation novel.

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Tamer of Cosmic Beasts

Table of contents

Volume 1 :New Life and New Journey

Chapter 1 - dropped