I'm still learning English, so I'll be happy to receive suggestions to improve my writing.

This book is a draft and can undergo severe alterations at any minute.

To be finished it is very important that you tell me what do you think about the story.

Even if you can't get through the first chapter, say it in the comments, that helps a lot.

There is not always a guarantee of a happy ending, but stories always find a way to continue.