At the moment I'm focusing on OVERKILL and how it's story will go. I reread this and thought "What the fuck did I just write?" So before I even post a new chapter for this particular series, I may need to do a rewrite for the two current chapters, story and dialogue won't change, however it might change your viewpoint on the protagonist just a bit
And if you're wondering. Yes, the protagonist is in fact stupid, story is mainly about a dumb 23-year old Highlander who discovers the world for the first time ever in his life and how he handles valid or controversial opinions from the other races.
Sincerely your dumb-ass author
Kenneth Bradfield II