ben10rocks

What happens if a bored God decided to intervene with the original storyline of Naruto world. What if he selected a canon fodder and blessed him with gifts changing his fate.
Follow in the footsteps of Arashi Uzumaki, a guy who was a cannon fodder in the original timeline, was saved and given two gifts by the God. Watch as he fought against his original fate and slowly becomes a powerhouse feared and respected by others. 
Lets follow him as he explores the limits of the world.

DISCLAIMER: I DONOT OWN NARUTO OR ANY CHARACTERS OR JUTSUS RELATED TO THE MANGA OR ANIME. MINIMUM 3000 WORDS FOR EACH CHAPTER.

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Total Power Output and Level Of the Planet's inhabitant(Raw Power)


Chunin : 100 - 1000, Mortal : Kushina(current)


Special Jonin : 1000 - 3000, Mortal : Tsunade(current)


Jonin : 3000 - 6000, Mortal : Arashi(current)


SS class : 50000 - 100000, Mortal : Onoki, Hiruzen, 3rd Raikage, 3rd Kazekage, 3rd Mizukage, Mito


SS+ class : 100000 - 250000, Mortal : Hashirama, Madara(EMS), Kyubi


SSS- class : 250000 - 550000, Quasi Divine : Six Path Obito, Six Path Madara, Naruto(Kyubi + Six Path Sage Mode), Sasuke(Rinnegan), Kinshiki Otsutsuki


SSS class : 550000 - 1000000, Quasi Divine : Hagoromo Otsutsuki, Hamura Otsutsuki, Momoshiki Otsutsuki, Urashiki Otsutsuki


SSS+ class : 1000000 - 2000000, Quasi Divine : Ten Tails(full power)


SSS++ class : 2000000 - 5000000, Quasi Divine : Isshiki Otsutsuki(1000 years before)


Demi God : 5000000 - 5000000000000, Semi Divine : Kaguya Otsutsuki(full power), Isshiki Otsutsuki(after absorbing chakra fruit), Dragon King Viserion, Phoenix Queen Nuri, Azure Dragon Longwei, Serpent King Ladon, Dragon Queen Tiamat, Ice Phoenix Aqua, Mermaid Queen Alana


Hello Author here!
My story is about a protagonist who was given a chance to change his fate. He would be given two gifts and later used them gain strength for himself and his friends while exploring the vastness of space.
I have chosen Naruto universe coz I like it. But I don't like the way Boruto manga is going on. So I am writing my own version. Their will be many overpowered characters and I am increasing the strength of all Otsutsuki clan members. They are a clan which conquers planet after planet. How can they be so easily defeated by kids like Boruto.
In my fanfic, villain will have a brain and get power ups like the protagonist. They will be defeated but not for their own stupidity.

well, as the main character he doesn't seem to have anything extraordinary defining him now,  
He is just a somewhat strong side character before Tsunade and the other girls now, 

Tsunade more powerful(physically) than him
with even better bloodline release(wood)

Mikoto and kano even kushima seem to have better eye powers 
And, they have even more powerful bloodline releases than him(wood, ice, earth) individually

at this point, [ch, 18]he is rather than being like a protagonist(mc) he's like a sub stepping stone for the girls

I think that's pretty good.faster updates.............................................................................................................................

Overall I really enjoy it! It isn't too cliché with the story development and powers. The Author also develops the powers of the MC's and those that he interacts with really well. I personally like the way that the bloodlines and unique powers are developed or obtained. The author does a good job when explaining things in detail and showcasing how things work in a logical, methodical way.

If there's one thing I could recommend the Author ben10rocks to change to perhaps make it easier to enjoy the story even more, I'd recommend reducing the amount info that he dumps in a singular chapter and integrating more character interactions into the story. The effort would honestly make this a perfect 5/5 for me.

update more chapter I like it very much don't stop keep going it's very satisfying to read it thanks for your hard work author san update more please [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Good fanfic
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Is it me or Does this guy just give up on good fanfics                                                                                            

it's sometimes I feel that 5 star are not enough.
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this is one of those fics....sadly it been some time since update

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this is really great I like it don't stop keep going update more chapter thanks for the chapter and your hard work author san but don't drop it please [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Good Fanfic

Keep up the good work
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Overlord of Naruto World

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Volume 1 :Academy Arc

Chapter 1 - Power Level