Adlyne_Faith

Kenya

This was a enjoyable story so far. Your writing style is simple and descriptive enough that I can envision everything that's going on. Your characters are written in a way that each character seem to have their own quirks and flaws and doesn't make them too lacking in depth and growth that some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage our emotions. It makes the character interactions more impressive. There were some mistakes in spelling and grammar, yet they are minor mistakes and don't distract from the story.

Overall this is a pretty good story and I would recommend this to anyone and I wish you well on your future writings.

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