Ok so I am making changes to the book since I don't want this to develop around the plot. And mostly cause I lost my dvds for the star wars series and don't wanna buy em again or get Disney+ I also took a break and was playing alot of video games, doing work, spending time with my dog and so on so forth,
Some changes
Axel will not be a Zabrak the leveling will be slower and will change most likely differing during time periods and what has happened. Ch 1 is still good since it says the way he died. Neutral system will have tweaks and may change into a sith type system when he is at his lowest and a jedi type system at his highest
I will probably post in a week with everything since I am making entire planet so I have describe the planet then the predators than the prey than the sentient species then on how the live what is the tradition how it varies I then have to see them interact and all that.